I'd like some feedback on my article : Stop Bullfighting.

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  1. Eng Kheng profile image73
    Eng Khengposted 6 years ago

    The link to my article is https://hubpages.com/animals/Stop-bullfighting

    Thank you so much!

  2. DrMark1961 profile image99
    DrMark1961posted 6 years ago

    Hi Eng I am not sure what you are looking for. The article has already passed QA since you removed the bloody pictures that I saw the other day.
    If you are looking for feedback because you want people to read this in the future, there is a lot you can do to improve. It is like a blog post at the moment, and, like most blog posts, it is going to be lost in the cyberworld and no one is going to see it.
    The first thing is the title. Stop bullfighting. Your competition is BBC, PETA, and many large news and animal rights organizations. There are over a million results for that phrase, and your article is most likely going to be buried way back.
    Why not change the article to "5 Ways You Can Stop Bullfighting" or something similar? Make your article helpful to the reader, give him some things he can read, think about, and implement.
    You can put your experience on there, but most people do not care much. Add the how-to part at the beginning and put your experiences further down in the article for those readers that are interested.
    Best of luck, whatever you decide to do.

    1. Eng Kheng profile image73
      Eng Khengposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Mark. Thank you for your kind suggestions. I will always strive to improve myself. I posted this because the editor team told me to rectify some grammatical/spelling errors in my article so that it can be moved to one of the network sites and I thought I could use some help from here.

  3. Rupert Taylor profile image80
    Rupert Taylorposted 6 years ago

    A free tool provided by Grammarly will help you fix the English language issues.

    1. DrMark1961 profile image99
      DrMark1961posted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I do not think so. He states that the bull was "terribly tortured". That would probably get by a program like Grammarly, but would not be okay for a writer like yourself.

 
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