I'd like feedback on my article: Canine Parvoviral Enteritis : Highly...

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  1. funmilayo odueko profile image36
    funmilayo oduekoposted 6 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Canine Parvoviral Enteritis : Highly Contagious and extremely fatal Viral disease of young dogs .

  2. DrMark1961 profile image99
    DrMark1961posted 6 years ago

    Where is the article? I am only seeing one photo.
    This is never going to be okay, as this site is set up for writers. I suggest you take a look at some of the articles on Pethelpful, and read the suggestions in the learning center before trying again.

    1. funmilayo odueko profile image36
      funmilayo oduekoposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      The article is still their

    2. funmilayo odueko profile image36
      funmilayo oduekoposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Good day sir ,thanks for your efforts can please help go through the article again ,I have tried to rearrange the article with main body appearing before the article

  3. theraggededge profile image82
    theraggededgeposted 6 years ago

    Funmilayo,

    I see you have excellent qualifications, but on reading your 'About' page, it is clear your English is not yet of a standard acceptable to HubPages.

    Your only featured article is muddled and difficult to understand and it looks as though you have persuaded your friends or fellow students to comment on it.

    You should probably focus on your veterinarian career and perhaps look to writing once your English has improved.

    Good luck.

    1. funmilayo odueko profile image36
      funmilayo oduekoposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Nice you Ma, but sincerely most people that comment on my feature article are not my friend or acquittance at all,
      I know I have a lost to do on my writing but what I write are majorly scientific articles ,I was just trying to break it down without too much scientific grammar and still retain the message.
      I noticed a lot of typographical errors while going over my article myself ,maybe because am writing them on Android phone , I hope to improve as I intend to get a small laptop soonest.thanks for your honest critics of my article

      1. funmilayo odueko profile image36
        funmilayo oduekoposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Can please ,help me go through this article I am hoping to publish and give  your candid review

  4. theraggededge profile image82
    theraggededgeposted 6 years ago

    We can't see it. It says 'Page not found'.

    1. funmilayo odueko profile image36
      funmilayo oduekoposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Ok , thank s

      1. theraggededge profile image82
        theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Try editing and resubmitting. You'll get another email. It means another forum thread will start, but that's okay.

        1. funmilayo odueko profile image36
          funmilayo oduekoposted 6 years agoin reply to this

          What is forum thread?

          1. theraggededge profile image82
            theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            This conversation is a forum thread smile

 
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