I'd like feedback on my article: How To Love God Unconditionally?

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   Grace Pureposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: How To Love God Unconditionally? (must be signed in to view)

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      My suggestion is that your title doesn't require a question mark.

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         Grace Pureposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         Ok, I will remove the question mark.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 5 years ago

   During a quick scan I noticed numerous grammar problems.
   
   "Loving God at the time of need and when He provides (provides what?) us is easy, however, it becomes very tough to love Him when things are not right in our life (should be lives).
   
   During my testing process I have learn't (learned) that things won't work the way we want, no matter how much efforts (effort) we put for making them straight.
   
   Try running your article through a free program such as Gramarly; it will catch and correct some errors but perhaps not all.

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      Grace Pureposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I have one more question. I want to earn by Paypal only. So, do we earn for page views on our articles or only by Amazon products?

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         theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         You earn according to views and you can add Amazon links for a little bonus. However, adding Amazon links that pass QAP is an artform.
         
         To earn via Paypal through the HubPages Ad program, you have to have an Adsense account. If you haven't got one already, you'll have to apply once you have written about 15 top quality articles. Your work will be assessed by Google in order to approve Adsense.
         
         https://hubpageshelp.com/money/Learning … y-HubPages

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            Grace Pureposted 5 years agoin reply to this

            Ok, then, I think I can earn per page views. Thanks for the reply.

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   Grace Pureposted 5 years ago

   Thank you for the feedback. I am receiving the corrections.

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      CYong74posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Is that you in your profile pic?

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         psycheskinnerposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         That is a picture of photographer Oliana Gruzdeva--and while she makes her work available for free use, it is probably not appropriate to use it in a way that suggests a person is her. when they are not

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   CYong74posted 5 years ago

   My guess is that HubPages, as a decent company, wouldn't risk misrepresentation and so on. Probably another reason why the work isn't approved.

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