I'd like feedback on my article: How To Love God Unconditionally?

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  1. Grace Pure profile image60
    Grace Pureposted 10 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: How To Love God Unconditionally? (must be signed in to view)

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 10 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      My suggestion is that your title doesn't require a question mark.

      1. Grace Pure profile image60
        Grace Pureposted 10 months agoin reply to this

        Ok, I will remove the question mark.

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 10 months ago

    During a quick scan I noticed numerous grammar problems.

    "Loving God at the time of need and when He provides (provides what?) us is easy, however, it becomes very tough to love Him when things are not right in our life (should be lives).

    During my testing process I have learn't (learned) that things won't work the way we want, no matter how much efforts (effort) we put for making them straight.

    Try running your article through a free program such as Gramarly; it will catch and correct some errors but perhaps not all.

    1. Grace Pure profile image60
      Grace Pureposted 10 months agoin reply to this

      I have one more question. I want to earn by Paypal only. So, do we earn for page views on our articles or only by Amazon products?

      1. theraggededge profile image95
        theraggededgeposted 10 months agoin reply to this

        You earn according to views and you can add Amazon links for a little bonus. However, adding Amazon links that pass QAP is an artform.

        To earn via Paypal through the HubPages Ad program, you have to have an Adsense account. If you haven't got one already, you'll have to apply once you have written about 15 top quality articles. Your work will be assessed by Google in order to approve Adsense.

        https://hubpageshelp.com/money/Learning … y-HubPages

        1. Grace Pure profile image60
          Grace Pureposted 10 months agoin reply to this

          Ok, then, I think I can earn per page views. Thanks for the reply.

  3. Grace Pure profile image60
    Grace Pureposted 10 months ago

    Thank you for the feedback. I am receiving the corrections.

    1. CYong74 profile image97
      CYong74posted 10 months agoin reply to this

      Is that you in your profile pic?

      1. psycheskinner profile image85
        psycheskinnerposted 10 months agoin reply to this

        That is a picture of photographer Oliana Gruzdeva--and while she makes her work available for free use, it is probably not appropriate to use it in a way that suggests a person is her. when they are not

  4. CYong74 profile image97
    CYong74posted 10 months ago

    My guess is that HubPages, as a decent company, wouldn't risk misrepresentation and so on. Probably another reason why the work isn't approved.

 
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