I'd like feedback on my article: Response to Kaitlin Menza's "All Men - Main...

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  1. Drew A Blanc profile image64
    Drew A Blancposted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Response to Kaitlin Menza's "All Men - Main Social ill" (must be signed in to view)

    1. quotations profile image92
      quotationsposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

      I have no idea who Kaitlin Menza is or what she said. I can infer from you article that she said something negative about men being a scourge. It is perfectly legitimate for you to debate her view.

      However your article is not an article. It is more of a rant and gets personal. The tone is not consistent with what you will find on this site or what hubpages wants. It might be appropriate on your own blog which you can set up for free for example with wordpress. But as is it will just not pass quality control and would require a complete re-write.

      If you want to adapt what you have written so it will pass quality control, browse through a few authors and see how they write and lay out their articles. Learn from others and do what they do, without copying their style or content.

      Note how they separate their writing in sections with headings, and photos. Especially you need a coherent discussion. You could start by explaining what this person said and who she is. Then move on to refuting her points with reasoned arguments, not invective.

      Hope this helps

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image97
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 weeks ago

    First, your title pre-supposes who Kaitlin Menza is and what she said that gets you all riled up. I for one have no idea what the controversy is about.

    Second, your article is somewhat abusive, and that doesn't go down well here.

    Third, it's too short.

    Fourth, it's not a magazine-style article that gives readers information they are looking for.

  3. psycheskinner profile image85
    psycheskinnerposted 4 weeks ago

    Please start by quoting or linking to what you are responding to.  Say why anyone should care what this guys says about anything.  Then maybe you can start explaining why they are wrong.  Consider: is this really something many people care about?

 
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