I'd like feedback on my article: How to Prevent Excessive Dehydration?

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  1. profile image0
    Calcina9posted 7 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: How to Prevent Excessive Dehydration? (must be signed in to view)

    1. greenmind profile image96
      greenmindposted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

      Unfortunately, your first sentence is a run-on that will make people searching for authoritative, well-written information leave your article and look elsewhere:

      "Drinking plenty of water is considered an ongoing real necessity towards extending life if you expect your health to periodically thrive and stay equally hydrated especially when evidence shows its been able to thwart wrinkles, diminish thirst, improve a decreased appetite, maintain normal body temperature as you freely sweat, keep sinuses unclogged and clear for easy blowing, stop bacteria from infiltrating urinary tract, unblock constipation."

  2. psycheskinner profile image84
    psycheskinnerposted 7 weeks ago

    I am sorry but I don't think a hub that says basically don't dehydrate by drinking water and not peeing, vomiting or sweating too much is not really going to help people using those search terms.  They are looking for a bit more than that.

  3. Coral Anders profile image76
    Coral Andersposted 7 weeks ago

    Having accidentally dehydrated myself (to the point I had to be admitted into a hospital) you might want to bring up the subject, "How could this possibly happen without me even noticing it".

  4. Doneta Wrate profile image88
    Doneta Wrateposted 7 weeks ago

    Shorter sentences read better and are easier to follow than super lengthy sentences like this one.  Those eight benefits of drinking water could be listed as bullet points and possibly elaborated on just a little within the bullet points.  The bullet points would also help break up your article.

  5. Doneta Wrate profile image88
    Doneta Wrateposted 7 weeks ago

    I just looked at your article.  One point that would help is that you are too wordy.  If you would cut excessive words out it would sound better.  But some places need rewording.


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