I'd like feedback on my article: Do You Want to Know About Allah Jewelry and...

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  1. profile image39
    Omair Kushtiwalaposted 6 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Do You Want to Know About Allah Jewelry and its Effects and Benefits on You (must be signed in to view)

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 6 weeks agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      You put a lot of effort into this. Unfortunately, you are not permitted to market your products or promote your business on HubPages. It's a platform for writers, not marketers.

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        Omair Kushtiwalaposted 6 weeks agoin reply to this

        Ok, thanks. I am already writing a new one that will be on point.

  2. AliciaC profile image97
    AliciaCposted 6 weeks ago

    You seem to have misunderstood the nature of HubPages. The purpose of your article appears to be to advertise and sell products from the company that you work for. HubPages doesn't accept promotional articles such as the one that you've created.

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      Omair Kushtiwalaposted 6 weeks agoin reply to this

      I will be creating a new one that just gives useful information and no promoting. I will leave that at work. Thanks for the tip

      1. theraggededge profile image97
        theraggededgeposted 6 weeks agoin reply to this

        You need to change your bio ('About' on your profile) before someone reports it.

  3. Kenna McHugh profile image89
    Kenna McHughposted 6 weeks ago

    This is an ad, not an article. You need to write about jewelry as an article.

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      Omair Kushtiwalaposted 6 weeks agoin reply to this

      Got it thanks. I am already writing a new one that will be on point.

  4. erorantes profile image49
    erorantesposted 6 weeks ago

    Good morning mr. Omari. I read your article very careful. I can tell you for certain that if you change the introduction of your article with out mentioning the company that makes the jewelry to an introduction that say for example. Jewelry that identifies many cultures and religions will sound more informative that how it looks now. It looks more like a blog only by reading the introduction. Remove the introduction and change the words. When you finish your article. You can mention where you can find any kind of jewelry. For instance, in  the groceries store, muslin supermarket, Jewish cochair store and Latin supermarket for the cross, flee market  jewelry with out leaving no one out. I am great full to you. I can Identify groups now. Good luck with your writing. I like your hub.

 
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