I'd like feedback on my article: low code platforms for pharma QMS! a right...

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   Ismail Baigposted 4 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: low code platforms for pharma QMS! a right choice? (must be signed in to view)

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   AliciaCposted 4 years ago

   Articles that promote a business aren’t allowed on HubPages. The link in your first paragraph goes to a commercial company and the first example in your list of low code platforms is the name of that company. Your bio also suggests that you are writing a promotional article.
   
   You need to remove all promotional aspects in the article and correct the English. You should also use APA capitalization rules for the title and subtitles and include the source for the photos. If the source is the company in your first link, though, you’ll need to replace the photographs. The photos that you use should have a suitable license. Your final paragraph shouldn't be written in bold print.

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      Ismail Baigposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Now I have made all the changes you have suggested, but still, it's not been featured. can you please review it again and give me feedback.

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         AliciaCposted 4 years agoin reply to this

         You've removed the link and the name of the company that I mentioned, but you've added a new link to the company in the "For more information" section at the end. You seem to be determined to write a promotional article.
         
         In addition, the title and subtitles still need to be written according to APA capitalization rules and language errors are still present. It's especially important that your first paragraph is free of errors. You need to be careful that you don't capitalize words unnecessarily in the middle of sentences.

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            Ismail Baigposted 4 years agoin reply to this

            please check now. I think I have done everything which you suggested.

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               AliciaCposted 4 years agoin reply to this

               The article is certainly better than when I last saw it, but it still contains grammar errors.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 4 years ago

   Your bio says "Ismail is an expert writer..." Perhaps, that is true of some language other than English. There are too many grammar and punctuation errors in this article for it to pass QAP.

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      Ismail Baigposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Oh! Can you suggest me any online tool which helps me to correct these.

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   psycheskinnerposted 4 years ago

   https://app.grammarly.com/

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   Ismail Baigposted 4 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: low code platforms for pharma QMS! a right choice? (must be signed in to view)

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