Hi Hubbers,
I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
Here is my article: Know About 16 Swaras (Notes) in Karnataka Music (must be signed in to view)
HubPages is an American site with a mainly American audience. Without a thorough explanation of karnaraka music, your article as it stands is gibberish to Americans.
To be successful on HubPages, you have to keep in mind that you are writing for a global audience who are not familiar with your culture. You must always provide background information when you are writing about a specific topic.
I don't mean to be disresectful. I write gardening articles. I always explain even the simplest concepts so that anyone, whether they garden or not, can understand what I am writing about.
Though your topic could be interesting, it’s probably unfamiliar for most people outside of your country or culture. I think many people where I live would stop reading the article before they've finished it because they don’t understand what they're reading.
An explanation of what Karnataka music is near the start of the article would be a good addition. You need to go into more detail about the music and move through your explanations more slowly. The addition of videos in which someone is playing the notes would be very helpful and would add interest to the article. In addition, you should reduce the amount of bold print in the article and proofread carefully so that you can correct the grammar errors.
Thank you so much Alicia . I keep that things in mind.
In addition to Alicia's comments, images must be free of copyright restrictions.
There's a lot of information here https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use
I understand. thanks for your valuable suggestion. I'll keep them in mind.
Hi Rajendra, I just took a look at your new article and I'm afraid it suffers from the same problems. It is full of errors. Your English language skills are simply not yet at a level suitable for HubPages.
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