Hi Hubbers,
I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
Here is my article: Lost in the Swamp: A Cautionary Tale (must be signed in to view)
Hi there,
Add an introduction that explains to your readers exactly what the piece is about. You need some factual stuff upfront, and then add in your personal experience. It starts off like a blog post.
Remove the Amazon capsules. If you used the items in your adventure, talk about them, and reference by a text link. If you didn't, then leave them out. People who use adblockers don't see the capsules, but they can see inline links.
Put your subtitles into title case and be consistent with them.
Your actual title isn't going to be searched for, so think about what people might be searching for in relation to the topic. "Hiking in Florida: Dangers and Precautions" might be along the right lines. Not so pretty, but more likely to turn up in search engine results.
Good luck, I'm sure you can get it through.
Thank you for your specific feedback. This formatting is new to me and your encouragement to persevere is appreciated.
Hi, James. Interesting article. I suggest that you omit the superfluous comma in 'Benjamin Franklin’s axiom, is an appropriate motto for day hikers “By failing to prepare, you are preparing to fail.”' so that it reads like this: 'Benjamin Franklin’s axiom is an appropriate motto for day hikers: “By failing to prepare, you are preparing to fail.”'
Thank you for your careful proof reading and specific feedback.
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