I'd like feedback on my article: How secure is take-out and delivery food...

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  1. Hamza Hussain Rana profile image62
    Hamza Hussain Ranaposted 4 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: How secure is take-out and delivery food during COVID-19 widespread? (must be signed in to view)

    1. CYong74 profile image96
      CYong74posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      HP is very sensitive about outbound links. These ought not to be in your text but in a reference section at the bottom.

      There are also several awkwardly phrased sentences. You should reword these.

      Titles must be in APA case style.

      Most importantly, I see from your profile that you are from Pakistan. Are you aware HP only pays via Paypal and that's not available for your country?

    2. OldRoses profile image94
      OldRosesposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      You have a lot of grammar issues.

      HubPages discourages outbound links.  In the case of your article, they aren't really necessary.  Most of what you are writing is already well-known so there is no need to send your readers to other sites for more information.

      Your article is much too short.  Aim for about 1,000 words.

      Be careful of phrases like "one-man army".  They are falling out of favor here in the US because they are considered biased against women.

  2. daydreams profile image94
    daydreamsposted 4 years ago

    Write about something that you have expertise in - where you can add something to what is already being said on the internet. Why would I trust what you say about this over somewhere else?
    I think you would be better off writing about something else.

  3. Brenda Arledge profile image81
    Brenda Arledgeposted 4 years ago

    You probably should break up your article into different texts capsules and msybe add a few other cspsules of photos or videos.
    Here is a link to show you how. https://hubpages.com/community/capsules

  4. psycheskinner profile image84
    psycheskinnerposted 4 years ago

    You really just repeat several times that no-one is known to have caught it that way/  I think this is a key message but you need to go further into it.  Under current testing no-one has a way to know how people were exposed so they can't eliminate this option either.  You need to investigate the theoretical possibility, how long the virus lasts on surfaces, the cost/benefit of taking potential unnecessary precautions etc. (For the record, I taker no precautions with food, but I am not the person who would be googling for this info.)

  5. AliciaC profile image91
    AliciaCposted 4 years ago

    I agree with what others have said, especially with respect to the information that you've shared. People who are keeping up to date with news about the virus have already heard about the facts that you've mentioned, so your article offers no value to them. You need to do some research to discover some lesser known facts about your topic. Adding these to the article would make it longer and perhaps more useful. It's important to include authoritative references at the end of the article, though.

  6. Kenna McHugh profile image92
    Kenna McHughposted 4 years ago

    Your bio does not reflect your expertise in this subject. Perhaps, you are not an expert, because, based on the comments, you lack the know-how of delivering an informative article about this sensitive subject.

  7. Hamza Hussain Rana profile image62
    Hamza Hussain Ranaposted 4 years ago

    Thanks Kenna Mchugh can you please guide how to correct that ?

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Write about topics within your scope of expertise.


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