I'd like feedback on my article: Effects of Social Media Usage at Workplace and.

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   abhijeet4800posted 4 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Effects of Social Media Usage at Workplace and Employee Productivity

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      theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      Is this about the effects of social media or about surveys? Because at first glance it looks like it's about surveys on the effect of social media.
      
      My suggestions:
      
      Move the poll from the beginning to further down the page.
      
      Replace the horrible clip art images with one or two relevant photos. You can get legal Creative Commons ones from Pixabay. Make sure to cite the owner and source.
      
      Add an introduction that tells the reader what the article is about.
      
      Stay on topic. Add any survey information later on. Write about the direct effects of social media.
      
      Only use links as references at the end of the article. There is usually no need to send your reader off the page. You want to keep them on your article for as long as possible.
      
      Some of your sentences are long and rambling. Read the text out loud and edit as necessary.
      
      Good luck.

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         abhijeet4800posted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you so much, I shall incorporate the said changes and keep you posted if the score improves

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         abhijeet4800posted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you theraggededge, I incorporated your suggestions and now the hub has become a featured hub.

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   psycheskinnerposted 4 years ago

   The message of your hub is muddled.  You start with the poll results (make sure that chart is free o use).  But you assume managers will think that poll means social media access is bad without explaining why.  Then you try to oppose that assumed response without providing data.  I would suggest making the hub much more clear and shorter (yes, both are possible) and find data to support your conclusion

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      abhijeet4800posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you psycheskinner. I shall follow what you have suggested and keep you posted on the score.

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      abhijeet4800posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you psycheskinner, I incorporated your suggestions and now the hub has become a featured hub.

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