I'd like feedback on my article: "Social Media Success: Connect, Engage, and...

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   shani Pashposted 2 months ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: "Social Media Success: Connect, Engage, and Grow Effortlessly!"

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      WriterJanisposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      I clicked on your link but only got an error page that said it couldn't find the page.

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      paolaenergyaposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Coffee break feedback:
      
      - there are no pictures
      - formatting needs fixing (capitalisation of first letter, see Hubpages style guide)
      - no sources to back up your statements
      - advice is generic, this type of information is widely available (sorry!).
      
      Bonus tip: lists of 5 items make me suspicious that AI may have been used to generate content ideas and, as you are aware, AI is not allowed on this platform.

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      Kenna McHughposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      It looks like you have copied some info from other sites. I would do a plagiarized check and rewrite it to make it your own. Though the topic has saturated the Internet, I doubt your article will rank high on the search engines. I suggest finding a topic not written about so much because your competition is fierce. HP Learning Center covers these issues I've mentioned. Go there. Study and learn. Good luck.

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   Miebakagh57posted 2 months ago

   Guys, likewise, I land on a 404 page.                                        Seems the author has unpublish his hub, and he's doing an editing.                                Clicking 'Edit' to make a minor or major changes in a story, should be prefered. The  'Unpublish' or 'Delete' button is the cause of this '404 'page not found'  error'.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 2 months ago

   Your opening sentence reads "In today's digital environment, the only means of communication is social media."
   
   That's not correct, there are other means of communication - face-to-face, written, zoom, etc.
   
   As a reader, if I see an incorrect statement at the start of an article I press the back button.
   
   There are other issues such as formatting. You need to spend time at the Learning Center - follow the link at "Help" top right.

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      PaulGoodman67posted 2 months agoin reply to this

      It also speaks of social media as if it's a singular thing, instead of a collection.
      
      For instance: "Gone are the days when social media was just a platform for sharing selfies or daily updates"
      
      Social media was never "a platform."
      
      I'm not sure what's going on with this article. The author doesn't seem to know what "social media" means.

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   FatFreddysCatposted 2 months ago

   It appears to be a generic collection of info that can easily be found in zillions of other articles on the same topic.

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   Gregory DeVictorposted 2 months ago

   Your paragraphs are much too long and need to be broken into smaller components. Remember, readers generally have short attention spans and don't want to be burdened with l-o-n-g paragraphs.

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