I'd like feedback on my article: 5 best life-saving survival essential tool for.

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   Ak Khandakerposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: 5 best life-saving survival essential tool for surviving in wild (must be signed in to view)

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      Here are the problems with your article:
      
      Not written in correct English. What are 'prepper gears'? And this? "...conceivably untimely skin maturing, skin malignant growth, and waterfalls in the long haul." Waterfalls?
      
      Doesn't include personal experience or why you are qualified to write on the topic.
      
      Promotes other websites.
      
      Never going to be approved.

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         Ak Khandakerposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         I'm not promoting.

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            theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

            What are those links to commercial sites at the end of the article?
            
            Anyway, they are the least of the problems. Your English needs a lot of work for you to be able to write here.

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      NateB11posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      The title is not in APA style and in fact is not capitalized at all, nor is the first sentence of the article. There are multiple grammatical errors and it makes it difficult to read.

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      OldRosesposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      You can't depend on translation software to write on HubPages.  When you use translation software, it makes literal translations of individual words without any grammar and syntax resulting in a string of English words that don't make any sense together. 
      
      HubPages is an American site and only publishes articles that are written in perfect English.  You need to improve your language skills before you can write here.

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         Miebakagh57posted 5 years agoin reply to this

         I agreed with Oldrose and the others. Write your articles more in your own words. Thanks.

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   Kenna McHughposted 5 years ago

   Your bio has nothing to do with this article. You are writing about survival and yet your bio says you are a digital marketer. Read the HP guidelines. They will help you understand what it needs for approval.

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      Ak Khandakerposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I love hiking and traveling

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         Miebakagh57posted 5 years agoin reply to this

         Ak, good. While write a specific article about hiking a mountain range. Make it between 1000 and 1500 words. Don't be generalizing. Then upload to Wisder Wisdom. All the best.

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            Miebakagh57posted 5 years agoin reply to this

            Ak, sorry for the blonder. I mean WonderWisdom site. Thanks.

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   Ak Khandakerposted 5 years ago

   Thank you all

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      Miebakagh57posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Very well appreciated. Welcome to HP.

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