I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks! Here is a link to my article: https://hubpages.com/religion-philosoph … ahabharata
Thank you throughout your help and always very grateful towards you
But currently the text of that article is 1459 words and if I add some more wouldn't that be quite long texts in the article Ofcourse I due respect your recommendation so should I make a new text capsule and write that paragraph or simply add it to existing capsule
No, you need a proper introduction to explain what the article is about.
I have articles 3k words and upwards.
There are too many names with no explanation as to who they are. The title is about a battle, so you need to get straight to the actual topic as soon as possible. All that stuff about who married whom and who they gave birth to is unnecessary to the title. The family tree explains all that (hope it is a legal-to-use image).
The problem is, that the war is described in great detail here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kurukshetra_War
That's your competition.
Think about how your article can be better than that Wiki. What extra information can you give. It needs to be a gripping account, otherwise your reader will get bored and press the Back button.
Thank you and totally agreed but let it be draft for 3 months after 3 months i will recreate it totally with your ideas currently I am student and should complete my higher secondary examination.
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