My first article drives me crazy.

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   Milan Krajncposted 2 years ago

   Hello, I need your help. I’ve corrected the article a few times already, and it is still not ok.   Your article wasn’t cleared for publication because it didn’t pass the Quality Assessment Process.
   I honestly don’t know what’s wrong anymore. Can anyone advise me, help me? Thank you for your time.
   
   The article is here: https://hubpages.com/hub/Water-Man?hubview, but it is probably not visible to you?
   
   Thank you.
   Have a nice day
   M.

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      Alvina Martinoposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      it's 404

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   theraggededgeposted 2 years ago

   Hi there,
   
   If you have had an email, there will be a link you can click on to get help from the community.
   
   Also, I'm confused... are you Milan Krajnc or are you Tina? Because if you are Tina and you are trying to promote Milan Krajnc, it won't work. You cannot use HubPages for advertising. No such article will pass QAP.

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   Milan Krajncposted 2 years ago

   Hi,
   no no, it is a mistake. Sorry.  I was doing something in between. I fixed the typos.
   I don't see the link you wrote. I see just some links to the learning center.
   Everything that is written is mine and from no one else. I know that already published articles are out of the question. Because of this, I wrote a new one, but it all came to a halt. I look at other articles, mine is similar to them, but ... Can you perhaps look at it, I saw that you have experience with it. I want to see mistakes that I don’t actually see. I can also pay you.
   M.

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      theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Why did you sign your (now edited) message off as 'Tina'? People don't usually make the mistake of using the wrong name. It's not a problem to write on behalf of someone else or as a team, but promotion is not permitted.
      
      There is a link on your email to get help from the community.
      
      I can't see your articles until they have been published or you click on that email link. And, no, I don't want any payment

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         Milan Krajncposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Is this the right one: https://discover.hubpages.com/relationships/Water-Man but I think is not active.   
         
         Again, I made a mistake,  I was not careful enough. Have too much on my mind.

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            theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

            No, you have to click on the link in the email. It generates a post here with a link to your article that we can read.

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               PaulGoodman67posted 2 years agoin reply to this

               I for one think you do deserve payment for this one, Bev! Somebody who has been driven crazy by their own article, who no longer recalls their name, requires a degree of help that deserves financial recompense!

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                  theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

                  Ha ha. I'm sure he'll figure it out.

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                  Milan Krajncposted 2 years agoin reply to this

                  I asked for help, not for insults.

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            PT Richardposted 2 years agoin reply to this

            Even if it did clear QAP, there's no one out there searching for articles about how selfish men are cool, using the keywords "water man."

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               Milan Krajncposted 2 years agoin reply to this

               Thank you.

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   theraggededgeposted 2 years ago

   It's visible now.
   
   The writer is trying to explain that selfish men care about their own feelings above others' but they are not selfish; just doing us women a favour.
   
   It's not working for me

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      Milan Krajncposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Question is,  how to edit an article to meet all the requirements so that it will be easier to add the next one.

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         theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         No one can tell you that because we all work differently. The best advice is to read many articles in your preferred category/network site and emulate (not copy) them.

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            Milan Krajncposted 2 years agoin reply to this

            Ok, thank you. So in this one is probably a problem with the content because it doesn't give readers some guidance for improvement.  I will try in a different way. Once again, thank you for your kindness.

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               theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

               You're welcome
               
               Yes, probably unsuitable content and perhaps some minor grammar errors.

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