I'd like feedback on my article: 6 Common Cloud Migration Challenges and How to.

  1. maryrowling profile image60
    maryrowlingposted 4 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article?

    Kindly tell me, What can I do to improve?

    Thanks!
    Here is my article: 6 Common Cloud Migration Challenges and How to Counter Them? (must be signed in to view)

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    1. Miebakagh57 profile image84
      Miebakagh57posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Mary, any new article or content post on the web  should be extremely unique.                           Your first capsule should probably be 'Adopting. Cloud Computing."            That said, let's examine the first paragraph sentence "Cloud computing has become very popular today." is apt opening sentence. "Each new day...continue to grow." should be the second sentence. I mean break most comlex sentences into simple and or compound sentences.     Re-write the compound adjectives: "well-known" as well known, "long-run" as long run and so on.                                  As the theragedged point out, proof reading is a task because lots of grammartical errors exists. But don't forget to draft a new introduction.

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  2. theraggededge profile image83
    theraggededgeposted 4 years ago

    Hi there,

    I think the first thing you need to do is a thorough proofread. For example, "It is found, businesses are adopting cloud infrastructure at a very exciting price."

    That comma is unnecessary. Price or pace? And why is it exciting? It's a clunky sentence. You don't need 'It is found'.

    "Businesses are adopting cloud infrastructure at a fast pace."

    So go through the article; get rid of repetition and unnecessary words and phrases. It needs to be crisp and clean.

    Delete the subtitle 'Introduction'. You don't need a subtitle for the first paragraph.

    The main problem you have is that this topic is covered widely on the web already. How are you going to compete with all those other articles and websites? This is one of the top search results on Google:

    https://searchcloudcomputing.techtarget … -migration

    You have to make your article better than that or you will get no readers.

    Good luck

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