I'd like feedback on my article: Healthy Food Tips In English

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   sakhawat hossainposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Healthy Food Tips In English (must be signed in to view)

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      Here are my thoughts:
      
      Firstly, you have a great writing voice. Really good. Your article is well-structured.
      
      What's the relevance of 'in English'? Everything on HubPages has to be in English. Do you mean something like 'in simple terms'?
      
      There are some formatting issues - don't use sub-headings as lists or to make points. Don't overdo the bold text.
      
      I don't see how the reference to the Space Odyssey scene is helpful to your article. Maybe I'm misunderstanding.
      
      Your images must be accredited and they must be legal to use. You can't take images from the internet unless you have confirmed they are carrying a Creative Commons commercial use license.
      https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use
      
      The article bio is missing. This is where you state your credentials for offering nutritional advice.
      
      Some of your advice is questionable. You talk about eliminating four foods; one of them, salt, is essential for life. Saturated fats are no longer seen as a bad fat when eaten in moderation: https://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/314693
      
      A diet high in fruit and fruit juices is not necessarily a healthy one. Grains are now considered to be the 'bad guys', especially because so much is genetically modified.
      
      Take a look at the Weston A. Price website - lots of good advice there.
      
      Finally, you are writing in (excuse the pun) an over-saturated topic. This means that you are competing with the biggest websites. And you are not writing anything that hasn't been written thousands of times before. Have a think if you could go more niche, more specialised.
      
      Tip: complete your profile properly.
      
      Good luck.

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      Miebakagh57posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      The title: "Healthy Food Tips" is very short and apt. So, why add "In English" that has no meaning throught the article?                                            Visit the learning center by clicking (HLEP) and learn how presentings articles get it pass  QAP.  Thanks.

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