I'd like feedback on my article: Jesus Christ Is Lord of All.

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  1. Man-123-2 manoharbalabhad profile image61
    Man-123-2 manoharbalabhadposted 7 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Jesus Christ Is Lord of All. (must be signed in to view)

    1. Miebakagh57 profile image41
      Miebakagh57posted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

      Hi there, this is a good story but it is too short as an article.                    There is a unique feature in it that I can't found elsewhere in similar story. Improve it to 1000 words or more.    Take good care of grammar and spelling. Much thanks and good success.

    2. OldRoses profile image96
      OldRosesposted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

      HubPages is an American site with mainly American readers.  Not all Americans are Christian.  There is also a large international audience for articles written on HubPages.  Not all of those readers are Christian.

      This article would do better if you wrote it from the point of view of explaining Christian beliefs to people who are not Christian who are looking for information on Christianity or seeking to understand Christianity.

      What you have written is a blog post.  HubPages is not a blogging platform.  If you want to write a blog, check out Blogger or WordPress, both are free.

      If you want to write on HubPages, you should know that it is a site that publishes deeply researched magazine style articles that are at least 1,000 words.

      For more information on how to write on HubPages, take some time to explore the Learning Center (Help button, upper right of your screen).  The articles in the Learning Center will teach you had to properly write and format articles for Hubpages.

  2. LongTimeMother profile image94
    LongTimeMotherposted 7 weeks ago

    There’s a few basic things including correct capitals in your subheadings, but the main problems are these...

    1) The article is too short. 
    2) Even more importantly, your topic is unlikely to attract traffic. Try writing articles that answer questions people are likely to be searching on the internet.
    3) You need to be sharing information most people don’t have ready access to or think they already ‘know’.

  3. Miebakagh57 profile image41
    Miebakagh57posted 7 weeks ago

    I agree with both Long Time and Old Rose. Both has said the article is short, and must supply needed information.                      You should do the need research to improve the article.


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