I'd like feedback on my article: Alpha Woman Do You Have It In You

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  1. Lubnaa Parvez profile image64
    Lubnaa Parvezposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Alpha Woman Do You Have It In You

  2. AliciaC profile image98
    AliciaCposted 2 months ago

    Hi. Here are some problems that I noticed.

    The first sentence in the article doesn’t make sense. The second is present on another website. There’s no space after the period (full stop) between the two sentences. You’ve forgotten this space in a few other places in the article.

    Some parts of the article don’t make sense. The section about women pointing their feet towards a particular person at a social event is almost identical to a section in someone else’s article. It’s important that you write in your own words.

    You should state references for the information that you’ve shared. If you’re a sociologist or in another profession that involves the study of human behavior, you should state this on your profile page and in your bio. You should show the source and license for your photos.

  3. Lubnaa Parvez profile image64
    Lubnaa Parvezposted 2 months ago

    Thank you so much for your kind response and pointing out my flaws in the article. And yes....it is definitely a researched topic on my behalf, so maybe the language and grammar Is identical to any other article, but it is very much written by me. Being a master in Human resources I too have some exposure towards human behaviour but I have not mentioned it in the bio, of course. I will definitely incorporate your suggestions. Again thanks and please be in touch.

  4. theraggededge profile image99
    theraggededgeposted 2 months ago

    Hi there,

    There should be a comma in the title after Alpha Woman.

    The first photo is horrible. And not credited. All images must have a Creative Commons license and be legal-to-use. The smoking one should be removed. You can find legal images on Pixabay and Unsplash.

    Subtitles should be in title case.

    Paragraphs must be separated by a blank line. Don't press Enter after every sentence - your writing should form paragraphs. One idea/point = one paragraph.

    Use Grammarly to check your grammar - there are many errors. You may need to work on your English.

    The distinction between your own writing and the parts you copied is obvious. Never, ever copy and paste someone else's work and pass it off as your own. That is stealing. Also known as plagiarism.

    Avoid nonsense phrases like "No one needs geo location to find you. Your aura can be felt for miles."

    I also took a look at your bulletproof coffee article and there is a lot of copied material in that also. It is written in a completely different style to your own writing. If you keep doing this, HubPages will close your account.

    Going by when you joined, you may have come here because of a certain YouTube video. Know that the guy is lying. You cannot earn here by recycling other articles on the web. All your work should be original.

    Edit: Even your sauces article is copied from other places. And you cannot take images from Pinterest.

    https://www.goodfoodstl.com/recipes/magic-green-sauce/

    Change or delete them or you will be reported.

  5. Lubnaa Parvez profile image64
    Lubnaa Parvezposted 2 months ago

    Thanks for your response. I will definitely incorporate your suggestions.

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Hurry up and delete the stolen material. HubPages staff see these forum posts.

 
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