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Well its now or never - please critique my hubs

  1. bonny2010 profile image60
    bonny2010posted 7 years ago

    where am I going wrong? Don't be shy Iam fully dressed for this -ya know - suit of armour,broken down hoss, broken lance ...

  2. Ohma profile image75
    Ohmaposted 7 years ago

    The only suggestion I would make is to break your page up with more text capsules. Other than that I was very intrigued.

    1. bonny2010 profile image60
      bonny2010posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you Ohma for your suggestion - I thought they were a bit bland too but wasn't ready for the adventure in unchartered territory. Many thanks for your time.

  3. AEvans profile image65
    AEvansposted 7 years ago

    Bonnie,

    I have read your hubs and they are an abundance of fun to read you bring them to life, what I would recommend is pics to represent your topic , add some Amazon capsule to generate some revenue if you have not already did that it, then sign-up it is free. smile

    1. bonny2010 profile image60
      bonny2010posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you AEvans - your advice is sound and I have since pulled out all my boxs of photographs from a previous life - what a mess I have created.
      I will look into the Amazon scene and other sites as well - I really appreciate your taking the time to help me - thank you

  4. wyanjen profile image84
    wyanjenposted 7 years ago

    I agree with Ohma and AEvans.

    I don't see where you are going "wrong" lol, but I do see where you could be adding to your work.

    When you create a new text capsule, you can give it a heading. This is a great way to incorporate your keywords, and it breaks up the page nicely. The bold headers are like teasers - they draw in the reader to continue on.

    Stock photos are easy to find. Be careful about copyrights.

    I always recommend this site:
    Dreamstime
    It is a site for freelance photographers to display their work. It has a large selection of free stock photos, and the premium photos are priced very well if you see one that you "must have".

    Good luck big_smile

    1. bonny2010 profile image60
      bonny2010posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you Wyanjen - I do see what you mean and I really appreciate the time you gave to my request - I am going to check out other hubs to see how they do things and see how I can put your advice into action - have checked out Dreamstime - interesting site - many thanks.

  5. Mikel G Roberts profile image88
    Mikel G Robertsposted 7 years ago

    I think your doing just fine. The loss of Joey made me...I got dust in my eye...(I truly did feel your pain.)

    Your words work well, the only thing I was left wanting was some pictures of the time on the river, when you were floating with the motor off...

    Nice work I'd say all in all...

    1. bonny2010 profile image60
      bonny2010posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you Mikel -i agree with you about the river, unfortunately I did not have a camera with me up in the Gulf - was taking a break from all that.
      Was going to put some realy good shots I have of crocs (taken when we did a wildlife documentary- but wasn't sure if it would be misleading or not) I really do appreciate your words and advice- many thanks.

 
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