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   Harsh Chunawalaposted 2 years ago

   This article is 100% unique and without any grammar mistake and also I have used capsuels then  Which type of improvement required in this article?.
   
   https://hubpages.com/money/6-Easy-Lesso … d-Poor-Dad

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      OldRosesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Your English needs improving.  You need to source your quotes.  Your photos need to be properly licensed.

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   FatFreddysCatposted 2 years ago

   "404. Page Does Not Exist"
   
   ...well, I tried. (shrugs)

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      Harsh Chunawalaposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Please try again.

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         theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Not working

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            bravewarriorposted 2 years agoin reply to this

            It's now on Discover.

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   Carb Divaposted 2 years ago

   Although it has been uploaded to Discover, there are still spelling and grammatical errors.

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   CYong74posted 2 years ago

   Harsh, I think there are three things to take note of:
   
   1) Minimize text within images. Pictures uploaded could undergo further compression and shrinking. Lines of small text become impossible to read.
   
   2) Grammarly is not a perfect tool. It is not even a writing tool, whatever the developers claim. In other words, it misses errors. It also doesn't correct unnatural sounding sentences.
   
   3) I personally feel the topic is unattractive. Robert Kiyosaki has been heavily criticized over the years. Some even say his parables are rubbish. Worse, he was accused of scams and even his co-author for Rich Dad, Poor Dad, sued him. Personally, he's hardly someone I would read for real financial advice.

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   quotationsposted 2 years ago

   There are actually a lot of grammatical errors. For example:
   
   "In this lesson, author Robert Kiyosaki says that middle and poor people pay more taxes than the rich because the rich know to understand money."
   
   Saying that the "rich know to understand money" is grammatically incorrect and basically nonsensical. I guess you are trying to say that the rich understand money better than the poor. Then say that. Try not to be so verbose especially when you don't use the words correctly.

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   Harsh Chunawalaposted 2 years ago

   Ok I understood my mistakes. Thank you so much for your valuable review. It helps me a lot.

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   bhattucposted 2 years ago

   Keep on writing. Update your articles after 6 months to 1 year time gap. Correct them and put more content if possible and then your articles will be featured in discover or even in niche sites. It is a continuous process and you will see the improvement yourself. Recently, I updated one of my articles which was lying in hubpages just like that but after so many corrections etc it is now in discover.

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