I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
Here is my article: 3 Simple Ways to Become Fearless (must be signed in to view)
Seems pretty straightforward to me. Sometimes, even tiny changes work. You can change the title to 'How to Overcome Fear.' Also, twigging the article a little helps. Change the '3' in the title to 'Three.'
Source your photographs or change any suspicious ones. Some minor grammatical problems, but they should not affect it. Capitalize 'god.
Hub Pages sometimes tell you what the problem is. Read their notes to you carefully. Om Shanti!
Thanks for the feedback. Can u just point the grammatical errors? It would help me fix n improve my writing.
Ok. I will take it and change it for you. Give me 20 mins. - Lantern
If you do it, then I will not be able to know my mistakes. I request if you can please highlight the errors.
If Lantern does it, you will never learn how to write in English. The errors will be fixed but you won't know why or how.
Edit: Sorry I misread. You are only asking for the errors to be highlighted, not fixed. That's a good way to learn.
Her writing is fine. We who are native speakers, can and do make mistakes. Sometimes, it can be more a question of habit than anything else. - Lantern
I misread her original post, I thought she was asking you to fix her mistakes.
Chuckle. 'Love you' theraggededge. Tell me about 'ragged' sometime.
It's because I used to do a lot of craft, sewing, and arty articles. I always liked a raggy raw edge
Your love of what you do or did. I think it's cute!
I know, my Dear. We esoteric and meta-physical aspirants, live in a different dimension. Ha ha. I offer you my Heart. Good night.
No sorry! It is okay. I am grateful that you took that chance to alert me.
If okay, can you list down the grammatical errors here? This is because still the article got unpublished.
Well, I read the whole thing. The changes are highlighted in red. I have also omitted a few words. Generally, one should not change the writer's voice, so your own consciousness is still there. if you want it, then send me an email. I have written to you via Hubpages. You should also change at least one photo.
Your article is easy to follow and it is clear. I think you could benefit from including some of the clear benefits of becoming fearless. Results are always what's for sale, and as a writer, even though you're not technically selling...you are. You want someone to read what you're writing, and you want them to read more from you. Especially if you write "how to's" That's my two cents
As Manatita says, the article does contain a few grammatical errors. I think it would be a good idea to fix them. I think you should also replace the images with ones that have a suitable license. The website mentioned on them says that their material is copyrighted. In addition, since each photo displays a web address and the address is the same on each image, a moderator may have thought that you were trying to promote the site.
You need to have a bio that proves you are a reliable source for this topic.
Is there any way to contact Hubpage n ask where the article is lacking?
This is because despite your valuable feedback points, the article is still not featured.
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