I'd like feedback on my article: 3 Simple Ways to Become Fearless

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  1. profile image52
    Dipaligandhiposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: 3 Simple Ways to Become Fearless (must be signed in to view)

    1. manatita44 profile image84
      manatita44posted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Seems pretty straightforward to me. Sometimes, even tiny changes work. You can change the title to 'How to Overcome Fear.' Also, twigging the article a little helps. Change the '3' in the title to 'Three.'
      Source your photographs or change any suspicious ones. Some minor grammatical problems, but they should not affect it. Capitalize 'god.

      Hub Pages sometimes tell you what the problem is. Read their notes to you carefully. Om Shanti!

      1. profile image52
        Dipaligandhiposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        Hi Manatita44,

        Thanks for the feedback. Can u just point the grammatical errors? It would help me fix n improve my writing.

        1. manatita44 profile image84
          manatita44posted 2 months agoin reply to this

          Ok. I will take it and change it for you. Give me 20 mins. - Lantern

          1. profile image52
            Dipaligandhiposted 2 months agoin reply to this

            If you do it, then I will not be able to know my mistakes. I request if you can please highlight the errors.

            1. theraggededge profile image99
              theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

              If Lantern does it, you will never learn how to write in English. The errors will be fixed but you won't know why or how.

              Teach yourself.

              Edit: Sorry I misread. You are only asking for the errors to be highlighted, not fixed. That's a good way to learn.

              1. manatita44 profile image84
                manatita44posted 2 months agoin reply to this

                Her writing is fine. We who are native speakers, can and do make mistakes. Sometimes, it can be more a question of habit than anything else. - Lantern

                1. theraggededge profile image99
                  theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

                  I misread her original post, I thought she was asking you to fix her mistakes.

                  1. manatita44 profile image84
                    manatita44posted 2 months agoin reply to this

                    Chuckle. 'Love you' theraggededge. Tell me about 'ragged' sometime.

              2. profile image52
                Dipaligandhiposted 2 months agoin reply to this

                No sorry! It is okay. I am grateful that you took that chance to alert me. smile

          2. profile image52
            Dipaligandhiposted 2 months agoin reply to this

            Hi Manatita44,

            If okay, can you list down the grammatical errors here? This is because still the article got unpublished.

        2. manatita44 profile image84
          manatita44posted 2 months agoin reply to this

          Thanks.

          Well, I read the whole thing. The changes are highlighted in red. I have also omitted a few words. Generally, one should not change the writer's voice, so your own consciousness is still there. if you want it, then send me an email. I have written to you via Hubpages. You should also change at least one photo.

    2. ahostagesituation profile image81
      ahostagesituationposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Your article is easy to follow and it is clear.  I think you could benefit from including some of the clear benefits of becoming fearless.  Results are always what's for sale, and as a writer, even though you're not technically selling...you are.  You want someone to read what you're writing, and you want them to read more from you.  Especially if you write "how to's" That's my two cents smile

      1. profile image52
        Dipaligandhiposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        Sure, will think on this too and implement. Thanks!

  2. AliciaC profile image97
    AliciaCposted 2 months ago

    As Manatita says, the article does contain a few grammatical errors. I think it would be a good idea to fix them. I think you should also replace the images with ones that have a suitable license. The website mentioned on them says that their material is copyrighted. In addition, since each photo displays a web address and the address is the same on each image, a moderator may have thought that you were trying to promote the site.

    1. profile image52
      Dipaligandhiposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Thank u. Will implement the same.

  3. Kenna McHugh profile image92
    Kenna McHughposted 2 months ago

    You need to have a bio that proves you are a reliable source for this topic.

    1. profile image52
      Dipaligandhiposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Oh ok. Thanks for ur feedback.

  4. profile image52
    Dipaligandhiposted 2 months ago

    Hello all,
    Is there any way to contact Hubpage n ask where the article is lacking?

  5. profile image52
    Dipaligandhiposted 2 months ago

    This is because despite your valuable feedback points, the article is still not featured.

 
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