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  1. Syeda Aala profile image75
    Syeda Aalaposted 22 months ago
    1. Amara Hassan profile image89
      Amara Hassanposted 22 months agoin reply to this

      As most experienced authors here have already provided you good enough suggestions, which you should consider. I welcome you on HubPages, and I liked your Hub on Naran Kaghan, they are my favorite places to visit in Pakistan. :-) So beautiful..!!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 22 months ago

    You need to cite the source of the image and you can only use it if it has a suitable Creative Commons or Public Domain license.

    You quote Norton and Rubin but you don't tell us who these people are. It's essential to identify your references.

    You should check out the Learning Center (follow the link at Help - top right) to read up on formatting.

    I found the content lacking in useful information. How people spend money is such an individual thing that I don't think general advice is of much use.

  3. AliciaC profile image93
    AliciaCposted 22 months ago

    Rupert has given you some excellent advice. I think you should also be very careful about your wording, including in the title of the article. The title suggests that you need to spend money to be happy. If someone has a low income or has an insufficient one for luxuries, spending some of the money that they have on unnecessary items could lead to financial difficulties and sadness instead of happiness.

  4. Jodah profile image91
    Jodahposted 22 months ago

    Good advice has been given already. You need to capitalize your capsule titles as well.

  5. Kenna McHugh profile image91
    Kenna McHughposted 22 months ago

    I am sorry to say the article is superficial. You need to dig deep and think through your ideas and thoughts on this subject. Psychology is a synthesized subject, not an exact science, so you need to be clever and transparent in your writing.

 
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