I'd like feedback on my article: Cooking With My Vitaclay Rice Cooker

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  1. glenbrook profile image76
    glenbrookposted 23 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? Everything written is based on personal experience with the product, and at least IMO it doesn't look spammy. What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Cooking With My Vitaclay Rice Cooker

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    1. WriterJanis profile image90
      WriterJanisposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      Hi!
      Honestly, it comes across more like an advertisement. I would suggest having a picture at the start of your article. I would also remove the Amazon ad. It looks like this isn't a new article but one written in 2014? Check your word count. I don't know what it is, but Google prefers around 1,000 words. Good luck!

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    2. Miebakagh57 profile image73
      Miebakagh57posted 23 months agoin reply to this

      Like as writer jam said, a picture at the beginning is preferable.
      You should upload a minimum of 3 photos.
      You can gain much from the Learning Center.  Click help at top right of your feed, and dig.

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    3. OldRoses profile image66
      OldRosesposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      Looks like a great review.  You just need to make it longer and place a photo at the beginning of your hub.  How about adding some photos of your own of the meals that you have cooked with your rice cooker?  And check the Learning Center (click Help in the upper right corner of your screen) to verify how HubPages wants you to format Amazon ads.  I think the capsule you are using is no longer allowed.  The preference seems to be a text link in the actual Hub.

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  2. AliciaC profile image92
    AliciaCposted 23 months ago

    I think you should post a photo of your own rice cooker to increase authenticity of the article. Tidy the cooker up if you need to, chose a good background, and then photograph it.

    Another problem could be the link. I don’t think there’s any harm in saying that the manufacturer’s website has a good collection of recipes, but the link may not be acceptable.

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