I'd like feedback on my article: 5 highly anticipated Korean movies to

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   Junah Maizurahposted 10 months ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article 5 highly anticipated Korean movies to watch in 2024.
   
   I got an email suggesting it may have spammy content so I edited it but I can't ponder if there are any errors still.
   
   I have only been a member 7 weeks ago and so far only got 1 featured article.
   Thanks, in advance.
   Here is my article: https://discover.hubpages.com/entertain … ould-watch

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      WriterJanisposted 10 months agoin reply to this

      Hi Junah! Welcome to HubPages!
      In looking at your article there are several issues.
      First, you need to properly credit your images and make sure they are licensed for you to use.
      You have way too much boldface print. It's like you're shouting to all of us.
      If you have sources for this information you should list them. This lends to the credibility of your article.
      I'd get rid of the white space you have and also do a grammar check. By the way, it should read Cast, not Casts.
      Have you looked at the learning center? It has a wealth of information that can help you.
      I hope this helps! Good luck!

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         Junah Maizurahposted 10 months agoin reply to this

         thank you

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            WriterJanisposted 10 months agoin reply to this

            You are so welcome!

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   theraggededgeposted 10 months ago

   Hi there,
   
   Putting the content aside because I know nothing about the topic, I see that your article has a lot of grammatical issues.
   
   The title should be in title case. Use this site to correct: https://capitalizemytitle.com
   
   'Traversing' is the wrong word and the sentence is clunky... find a better fit. Maybe, "Since the early 1990s, Korean movies have been making inroads into the industry, bringing K-pop culture to the world in the 'Korean Wave'.
   
   Country's, not countries' The first is singular possessive, and the second is plural.
   
   Put the first call-out capsule under the title it's related to.
   
   Put ALL the text through the free Hemingway app to correct the grammar and style. Several 'awkward' sentences could be improved with a little refinement. Also, install Grammarly into your browser. It's also free and will pick up grammatical errors as you paste your text into the capsules.
   
   Attribute your images. They must be free to use, i.e. they should have a Creative Commons or Public Domain license. You might find some useful images in Wikipedia. Check this out: https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use It's very important.
   
   Cast, not casts.
   
   The 'Release Date' headings should be H3.
   
   When writing the synopsis, include the title of the film... "Escape" follows the story of a North Korean soldier... Make sure to put movie titles in the text into italics.
   
   No parenthesis around the directors' names. Names shouldn't be in italics.
   
   You don't need the disclaimer at the end.
   
   Those are the problems that stand out for me. Someone else may spot others.
   
   You have quite a bit of work to do but you will learn a lot from it.
   
   Good luck.

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   Junah Maizurahposted 10 months ago

   this is such a great help thank you so much

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