I'd like feedback on my article: Six Ways Men Can Escape Poverty

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  1. Nyamweya profile image60
    Nyamweyaposted 6 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Six Ways Men Can Escape Poverty

    1. AliciaC profile image94
      AliciaCposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      I was angry when I had finished reading your article, but I will try to say something constructive.

      The photo needs credits to show that it has been used legally. Spacing is incorrect in some areas. Phrases have been started with capital letters.

      Get the right woman? What’s happened to marrying for love? In addition, I doubt whether “a woman who just makes you hard” will be accepted by HubPages.

      I also doubt whether saying that a man has the energy to give a woman five orgasms will be accepted either.

      Your statement about personally killing a bird could be offensive for some people.

      HubPages is published in the United States. In North America, women can be leaders as well.

      Your last sentence could also be offensive for some people. Some people do manage to combine prayer with an active life.

    2. Jan Stepan profile image92
      Jan Stepanposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      There's no chance this article will make it through the QAP process.

      Either you'll have to learn what kind of articles HubPages wants, or you will struggle forever with not getting your things published.

      As for the information in the article, I rather not comment whatsoever.

    3. WriterJanis profile image92
      WriterJanisposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      Oh my! OK. Content aside. You need to credit your photo and be sure it's under the right licensing to be used on this site. Your article also seems to have a short word count.

  2. theraggededge profile image97
    theraggededgeposted 6 months ago

    The top image in your article is a clearly watermarked stock image. You can't use them.

    I was reading through one or two of your huge number of articles and they seem to be written by a woman. There's nothing wrong with two people sharing an account but it's a bit confusing when the author has a male name and photo.

  3. FatFreddysCat profile image92
    FatFreddysCatposted 6 months ago

    Ummm... wow.

    Anything I might add would just be piling on at this point, so I'll just say "Yeah, do what everybody else said."

  4. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 6 months ago

    Good grief. "Get the right woman." What planet are you living on? I read no further after what is a deeply offensive statement. I see from Linda's comment the piece gets even worse and I'm glad I didn't proceed.

    There is nothing that can be done to save this and, frankly, I'm shocked it even made it on to Discover.

    1. Jan Stepan profile image92
      Jan Stepanposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      I am utterly shocked as well.

      There's no way Discover will ever improve its rankings on search engines if these "articles" (if one can even call them that) are allowed here.

      1. theraggededge profile image97
        theraggededgeposted 6 months agoin reply to this
      2. Nyamweya profile image60
        Nyamweyaposted 6 months agoin reply to this

        I think you should apply for a job at hubpages as an editor/moderator, you can really do a good job for sure..

        1. Jan Stepan profile image92
          Jan Stepanposted 6 months agoin reply to this

          I'd be the best – you can count on that. wink

          Sigh...

  5. Gregory DeVictor profile image96
    Gregory DeVictorposted 6 months ago

    In summary, the article is "execrable."

  6. Bills Place profile image85
    Bills Placeposted 6 months ago

    As with everyone else, I didn't spend much time reading the article in-depth. Right off, the only part that looked decent was the title. In addition to what everyone else has said, grammar is another area to consider.

    The sentences go from one to another.Like this without a space. That's about all I can add that I didn't see mentioned before.

  7. Miebakagh57 profile image73
    Miebakagh57posted 6 months ago

    Our writer here needs to write an article, educating us men how we can give our women 5 quality orgasm. Not a bad idea at all.                                   The women are crying for that, and the men are not up to the task satisfying the ladies.                                Seriously, such an article will easily male its way to a network site, and remain evergreen.

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      Oh, please...

      No.

      "Women are crying for that..." Really? big_smile big_smile big_smile

      How about you just let women tell you men how to do it?

      1. Miebakagh57 profile image73
        Miebakagh57posted 6 months agoin reply to this

        Really? I wouldn't hesitate to read the stuff, or even bought it in ebook dform.

        1. theraggededge profile image97
          theraggededgeposted 6 months agoin reply to this

          Point missed.

          Maybe you should talk to your wife rather than trying to acquire such education from a man?

          We're all different.

          1. Nyamweya profile image60
            Nyamweyaposted 6 months agoin reply to this

            Good point

    2. Jan Stepan profile image92
      Jan Stepanposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      "The men are not up to the task"?

      Where'd you get that from? big_smile Just curious...

      1. Miebakagh57 profile image73
        Miebakagh57posted 6 months agoin reply to this

        Seems we're about to split hairs? I'm backing off.

 
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