I'd like feedback on my article: Six Ways Men Can Escape Poverty

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   Nyamweyaposted 17 months ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Six Ways Men Can Escape Poverty

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      AliciaCposted 17 months agoin reply to this

      I was angry when I had finished reading your article, but I will try to say something constructive.
      
      The photo needs credits to show that it has been used legally. Spacing is incorrect in some areas. Phrases have been started with capital letters.
      
      Get the right woman? What’s happened to marrying for love? In addition, I doubt whether “a woman who just makes you hard” will be accepted by HubPages.
      
      I also doubt whether saying that a man has the energy to give a woman five orgasms will be accepted either.
      
      Your statement about personally killing a bird could be offensive for some people.
      
      HubPages is published in the United States. In North America, women can be leaders as well.
      
      Your last sentence could also be offensive for some people. Some people do manage to combine prayer with an active life.

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      Jan Stepanposted 17 months agoin reply to this

      There's no chance this article will make it through the QAP process.
      
      Either you'll have to learn what kind of articles HubPages wants, or you will struggle forever with not getting your things published.
      
      As for the information in the article, I rather not comment whatsoever.

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      WriterJanisposted 17 months agoin reply to this

      Oh my! OK. Content aside. You need to credit your photo and be sure it's under the right licensing to be used on this site. Your article also seems to have a short word count.

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   theraggededgeposted 17 months ago

   The top image in your article is a clearly watermarked stock image. You can't use them.
   
   I was reading through one or two of your huge number of articles and they seem to be written by a woman. There's nothing wrong with two people sharing an account but it's a bit confusing when the author has a male name and photo.

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   FatFreddysCatposted 17 months ago

   Ummm... wow.
   
   Anything I might add would just be piling on at this point, so I'll just say "Yeah, do what everybody else said."

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   Rupert Taylorposted 17 months ago

   Good grief. "Get the right woman." What planet are you living on? I read no further after what is a deeply offensive statement. I see from Linda's comment the piece gets even worse and I'm glad I didn't proceed.
   
   There is nothing that can be done to save this and, frankly, I'm shocked it even made it on to Discover.

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      Jan Stepanposted 17 months agoin reply to this

      I am utterly shocked as well.
      
      There's no way Discover will ever improve its rankings on search engines if these "articles" (if one can even call them that) are allowed here.

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         theraggededgeposted 17 months agoin reply to this

         But they are allowed:
         
         https://discover.hubpages.com/business/ … n-Masseuse

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         Nyamweyaposted 17 months agoin reply to this

         I think you should apply for a job at hubpages as an editor/moderator, you can really do a good job for sure..

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            Jan Stepanposted 17 months agoin reply to this

            I'd be the best – you can count on that.
            
            Sigh...

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   Gregory DeVictorposted 17 months ago

   In summary, the article is "execrable."

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   Bills Placeposted 17 months ago

   As with everyone else, I didn't spend much time reading the article in-depth. Right off, the only part that looked decent was the title. In addition to what everyone else has said, grammar is another area to consider.
   
   The sentences go from one to another.Like this without a space. That's about all I can add that I didn't see mentioned before.

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   Miebakagh57posted 17 months ago

   Our writer here needs to write an article, educating us men how we can give our women 5 quality orgasm. Not a bad idea at all.                                   The women are crying for that, and the men are not up to the task satisfying the ladies.                                Seriously, such an article will easily male its way to a network site, and remain evergreen.

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      theraggededgeposted 17 months agoin reply to this

      Oh, please...
      
      No.
      
      "Women are crying for that..." Really?
      
      How about you just let women tell you men how to do it?

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         Miebakagh57posted 17 months agoin reply to this

         Really? I wouldn't hesitate to read the stuff, or even bought it in ebook dform.

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            theraggededgeposted 17 months agoin reply to this

            Point missed.
            
            Maybe you should talk to your wife rather than trying to acquire such education from a man?
            
            We're all different.

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               Nyamweyaposted 17 months agoin reply to this

               Good point

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      Jan Stepanposted 17 months agoin reply to this

      "The men are not up to the task"?
      
      Where'd you get that from? Just curious...

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         Miebakagh57posted 17 months agoin reply to this

         Seems we're about to split hairs? I'm backing off.

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