Yeah I knew I never made it to the contest but I have always wanted to write on this topic and here it is http://hubpages.com/hub/kids-fitness Its about kids fitness. I want YOU to read, review and notify me of how it can be better. ok. Hanging
I only glanced at your hub for a moment but my two cents would be use more capsules. I would create 3 new text capsules with the titles of each being Exercising for Children, Dieting, and Sleep, respectively. Then just paste the corresponding text in each capsule. This would give the eyes a break and make it a quicker read, I think.
"For ways to keep children fit, let's look at this few necessary points:"
Grammatically I think that "this" should be "these". This was just something that popped out at me, not sure why.
by Nichole Thomas 7 years ago
I am new to hubing and new to writing in general lol:) I am a just decided one day I needed to find something that I liked to do other than caring for kids. So writing has just stuck.I just want your opinions about everything how I am doing with my writing and what you think.
by mountainmama 9 years ago
Hi all, i am a newby, have been here about 3 weeks and posted a few hubs, and would love some comments to see if i am on the right track. i havent wanted to invite any family or friends to read my stuff yet, as i am writing to get my esteem and abilities up to snuff. It's easier to ask...
by John Olson 7 years ago
Hello there, fellow Hubbers.Since I'm new here, and have only published 4 hubs so far, I'm very willing to get bashed from every possible directions with criticism, suggestions and ideas from more experienced Users. Thank You All in advance, and have a great day.My...
by keish_777 7 years ago
I had just finished writing an article on hub and about to add pics when firefox malfunctioned and shut down! does hub automatically save our work. How can i get back my work? Its almost time for me to leave for work!
by Brittany Banks 21 months ago
I don't know what is going on with my articles lately, but every time they edit them, my amazon capsules are removed. Once they remove the amazon products, they publish it and feature it. I don't understand why this is happening to my articles. If they are going to remove the amazon capsules, then...
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