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Constructive Criticism

  1. carylcress profile image59
    carylcressposted 6 years ago

    I just posted my first hub and would like some constructive criticism before starting another one so I can avoid the same mistakes.

  2. Cagsil profile image61
    Cagsilposted 6 years ago

    Welcome to Hubpages! smile

    Just to let you know, you are allowed to post a link to your hub that you would like critiqued. smile

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Are-Your-Employees-Motivated

    I have done it for you. smile

  3. Cagsil profile image61
    Cagsilposted 6 years ago

    Review of your hub is not good. However, don't worry.

    (a) Not enough content. It should be about 400-500 words. I didn't count your words, but it appears to be very short.

    (b) Not enough keywords/tags. Articles up to 1500 words can utilize 9-15 keywords/tags. Articles over 1500 words can utilize up to 40 keywords/tags.

    Please visit the Learning Center to get a better grasp of "What Is a Hub?"

    http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/contents

  4. carylcress profile image59
    carylcressposted 6 years ago

    Thanks for the critique!

    1. Cagsil profile image61
      Cagsilposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      You're welcome. smile

      1. Randy Godwin profile image92
        Randy Godwinposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        You lika da blondes, eh Ray!  lol

        1. Cagsil profile image61
          Cagsilposted 6 years ago in reply to this

          Hey Randy, truth be told, my preference is brunettes. tongue

          1. Randy Godwin profile image92
            Randy Godwinposted 6 years ago in reply to this

            I just hope she reads the " Ladies Please Beware of Cagsil" section in the get started guide!  lol

            1. Cagsil profile image61
              Cagsilposted 6 years ago in reply to this

              Smart a$$ lol

              1. Randy Godwin profile image92
                Randy Godwinposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                You misspelled asp again, Ray!  I beginning to wonder if you're doing that on purpose!  roll

  5. kschang profile image88
    kschangposted 6 years ago

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    1) Way too short

    2) You did not explain at all why employees needs to be motivated at all. You simply assumed that we all know what you're talking about.

    3) You need to use capsules. Right now seems everything is squished into one capsule. Looks a little funny.

    1. carylcress profile image59
      carylcressposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you!  Will work on these suggestions smile

    2. carylcress profile image59
      carylcressposted 6 years ago in reply to this
 
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