Constructive Criticism

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  1. carylcress profile image57
    carylcressposted 7 years ago

    I just posted my first hub and would like some constructive criticism before starting another one so I can avoid the same mistakes.

  2. Cagsil profile image82
    Cagsilposted 7 years ago

    Welcome to Hubpages! smile

    Just to let you know, you are allowed to post a link to your hub that you would like critiqued. smile

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Are-Your-Employees-Motivated

    I have done it for you. smile

  3. Cagsil profile image82
    Cagsilposted 7 years ago

    Review of your hub is not good. However, don't worry.

    (a) Not enough content. It should be about 400-500 words. I didn't count your words, but it appears to be very short.

    (b) Not enough keywords/tags. Articles up to 1500 words can utilize 9-15 keywords/tags. Articles over 1500 words can utilize up to 40 keywords/tags.

    Please visit the Learning Center to get a better grasp of "What Is a Hub?"

    http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/contents

  4. carylcress profile image57
    carylcressposted 7 years ago

    Thanks for the critique!

    1. Cagsil profile image82
      Cagsilposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      You're welcome. smile

      1. Randy Godwin profile image90
        Randy Godwinposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        You lika da blondes, eh Ray!  lol

        1. Cagsil profile image82
          Cagsilposted 7 years agoin reply to this

          Hey Randy, truth be told, my preference is brunettes. tongue

          1. Randy Godwin profile image90
            Randy Godwinposted 7 years agoin reply to this

            I just hope she reads the " Ladies Please Beware of Cagsil" section in the get started guide!  lol

            1. Cagsil profile image82
              Cagsilposted 7 years agoin reply to this

              Smart a$$ lol

              1. Randy Godwin profile image90
                Randy Godwinposted 7 years agoin reply to this

                You misspelled asp again, Ray!  I beginning to wonder if you're doing that on purpose!  roll

  5. kschang profile image86
    kschangposted 7 years ago

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    1) Way too short

    2) You did not explain at all why employees needs to be motivated at all. You simply assumed that we all know what you're talking about.

    3) You need to use capsules. Right now seems everything is squished into one capsule. Looks a little funny.

    1. carylcress profile image57
      carylcressposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you!  Will work on these suggestions smile

    2. carylcress profile image57
      carylcressposted 7 years agoin reply to this
 
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