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Please let me know what you think

  1. flightofdestiny profile image60
    flightofdestinyposted 6 years ago
  2. Cagsil profile image60
    Cagsilposted 6 years ago

    Hey Destiny,

    Just to let you know, it's bad forum decorum to use trackers, when asking for help or critiquing. wink

    1. flightofdestiny profile image60
      flightofdestinyposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Sorry I didn't even think about it. I won't let it happen again. Duh... my brain totally wasn't working! lol

  3. Cagsil profile image60
    Cagsilposted 6 years ago

    I reviewed your hub.

    (a) a little bit short on content.
    (b) should have smaller paragraphs, so as to keep the attention of your reader.
    (c) should have more keywords/tags.

    It would be best for you to check out the Learning Center. I have provided the link below. smile

    http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/contents

  4. R.S. Hutchinson profile image84
    R.S. Hutchinsonposted 6 years ago

    There are a few typos.

 
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