you are dear!

  1. ceegeeess profile image55
    ceegeeessposted 8 years ago

    When you are sad
    Can't I be glad,
    When you are glad
    Sure, I am the same!

    If you progress in life,
    I feel you are great and wothy,
    Whenever you fail(at all!0,
    Ifeel that I failed
    In bringing you up!

    When you kiss your child,
    I touc h my cheeks and am shy!
    When you are sick
    I feel my health bad!
    When you are happy
    I can nevr be unhappy!

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  2. fastfreta profile image78
    fastfretaposted 8 years ago

    This is beautiful, you should put this in a hub.  However it's not quite long enough.  Just add a little dialogue as to why and maybe to whom, you wrote the poem or add another one and you should have enough.  Don't waste it here in the forum, Hub it.

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    1. chinweike profile image68
      chinweikeposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      I agree with you fastfreta, that poem is too precious to be wasted here in the forum. It can only be here if it is not original or has been published else where

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