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   aaditysonyposted 12 years ago

   I have wrote 12 hubs here, after 3 days of publishing them i got message i need to revise one article, happy! after 6 days suddenly all the articles showing red Link and i need to reconsider them....... very upset why it happens
   
   I have stopped writing on hubpages
   
   Here i have give links few pages, will you help me to finding out the issues.....??? 
   
   http://aaditysony.hubpages.com/hub/Real … -or-a-Scam
   
   http://aaditysony.hubpages.com/hub/Online-Money-Geek
   
   http://aaditysony.hubpages.com/hub/An-U … net-Part-1
   
   http://aaditysony.hubpages.com/hub/Top- … e-Mturkcom
   
   http://aaditysony.hubpages.com/hub/Bigg … ternatives
   
   http://aaditysony.hubpages.com/hub/Bigg … ternatives

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      CASE1WORKERposted 12 years agoin reply to this

      we cannot view them as they are unpublished- if you genuinely do not know why then e mail the team at hubpages.
      Usually it is because they are too short, spammed or copied or use such poor english that no one can enjoy reading them.
      If this is not the issue then try and do what you did to the one that you revised

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         thooghunposted 12 years agoin reply to this

         You can usually view the cached version on Google Case by appending the "site:" function to the profile URL and then viewing the cached articles (doesn't always work hehe). I have read through a few of them aaditysony, and I'm fairly sure that while the content is of use, it is the language itself which needs to be revised. It was a bit confusing. E.G:
         
         "I would not say it’s a legit company nor a spam, but I recommend you to keep away to business with this company till the Indian Court not declaring the result".

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            IzzyMposted 12 years agoin reply to this

            I would agree Thooghun, I read through his stuff and it's confusing trying to understand what he is trying to say.
            
            I also noted that at least his first hub was copied, presumably from his own blog, the contents of which have been deleted but not yet cleared from the cache.
            
            Also, it is highly suspicious if your very first hub contains the phrase "In my earlier post I reviewed Luminate.com for In-Image blog monetization". You wouldn't have an earlier post to review anything in.
            
            Plus putting up six hubs in less than 30 hours or so, is suspicious of translated or duplicated content, sorry but it is.

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      kschangposted 12 years agoin reply to this

      The problem here is we're not sure, judging by your English thus far, that either you're a robot rewriter posting poorly spun crap, or you're a foreign national trying to write and publish bad English.
      
      No insult was intended, but can be construed.

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      IzzyMposted 12 years agoin reply to this

      Just re-read this. Don't tell porkies (porky pies) about how long you've been here. You've been here 2 days so what's all this about 6 days?

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   IzzyMposted 12 years ago

   Oh and the OP is a he according to his cached hubs, but maybe he's had a sex change in the last few minutes who knows?

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      thooghunposted 12 years agoin reply to this

      I've heard it sells! When I put up my real picture my bounce rate increased momentously. Flattering!
      
      P:S then again perhaps a picture of a 20 something year-old guy smiling on a hub about HPV in women doesn't inspire much trust.

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         aaditysonyposted 12 years agoin reply to this

         Ok !! in all ways you are right
         but what should be my further steps, i want to stay here..... :-(

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