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  1. lbramos profile image60
    lbramosposted 11 years ago

    Hi,

    Can you please give me your feedback on this last hub of mine:

    http://lbramos.hubpages.com/hub/The-bla … enova?done

    Is there two many videos? How can I balance it more? It seems to be "too heavy"...

    If you have the chance, please take a look a a few other hubs of mine and tell me your opinion!

    I will do the same to your hubs if you want!

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    1. Randy Godwin profile image60
      Randy Godwinposted 11 years agoin reply to this

      First off, too many spelling and grammatical errors in this hub.  And I didn't get past the first few paragraphs.  Sorry, you have a lot of cleaning up to do.  smile


                                       http://s4.hubimg.com/u/6812619.jpg

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      1. lbramos profile image60
        lbramosposted 11 years agoin reply to this

        Thanks for the notice! Shame on me... it had too many errors... sad I've fixed it now!
        Thanks again for your feedback

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  2. Dame Scribe profile image58
    Dame Scribeposted 11 years ago

    I would suggest moving some of the video's off to the side to maintain flow of the text. I thought I was at the end a few times. Over all, good job smile

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    1. lbramos profile image60
      lbramosposted 11 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for the feedback, I'll try to fix that

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      1. lbramos profile image60
        lbramosposted 11 years agoin reply to this

        I've changed the videos to the right of the text and for me it looks a lot better! Thanks for your advise!

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  3. seanorjohn profile image70
    seanorjohnposted 11 years ago

    Well done for writing this hub in English when it is not your first language. Change 'why did it had to be white' to 'Why does it have to be white'.

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    1. lbramos profile image60
      lbramosposted 11 years agoin reply to this

      Corrected smile Thanks for the feedback smile

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