When My Hubs will be published ?

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   RCModelsposted 9 years ago

   I have done two hubs but every time i try to publish them i get the same Email saying "it did not pass the Quality Assessment Process.  improve the Hub so that it meets our quality standards. To graduate from Boot Camp, you must publish at least five Featured Hubs."
   i wrote those hubs my self ,i did the reading for "HubPages' Quality Assessment Process," many times and modified my hubs many times but the results are same ,should i wait till 5 hubs then i will be allowed to publish them ???
   can any one review them please and tell me whats wrong or missing ,here it's the links for my hubs
   http://rcmodels.hubpages.com/hub/Build- … odel-Plane
   http://rcmodels.hubpages.com/hub/Basic- … -Explained
   Thanks

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      Vineet Dubeyposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      I read your hubs, the content is good but they have formatting issues. For example, you have changed paragraphs without completing sentences. There are grammatical errors as well. Work upon them and resubmit your hubs.

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      LeanManposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Hi, welcome to HP,
      
      The quality assessment process is there to ensure that your writing is up to "standard".
      
      However a quick look at one of your hubs which appears to be published shows writing such as;
      
      "I'm Flying Radio Control Models since 90's ,we had AM radios back then ,i still remember my shiny Futaba Attack 4 and my high wing trainer with Osmax 40,building such plane from balsa was time consuming ,attaching a nitro engine in the front made us do amazing reinforcement ,no one indeed wanted the Engine running after him in the ground "
      
      This is not good English! You need to read what you write out loud to see how it sounds and maybe try going on an English writing course. Best of luck with your hubs.

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   Msmillarposted 9 years ago

   Hi RCModels, LeanMan is 100% correct, "Read what you write out loud...".  Hubpages won't publish a hub if it's not written, at least, with some care in mind.  I know you can write better than that.  Your spelling is perfect and your story line is interesting.  Focus on punctuation and run-on sentences.  You can also copy what you've written and plug it into Google translate (English to English) and hear how it sounds when the narrator reads it. You'll be surprised at what your words sound like.
   Good Luck!

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      RCModelsposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      By the way I like your profile background so much ,is it a Mustang    ?

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         Msmillarposted 9 years agoin reply to this

         Oh, yes, but it's not any Mustang, it's my baby, lol. I got a darn good deal on it too!  It's fun to drive and of course I have the subs in the trunk!  Happy Hubbing!

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   RCModelsposted 9 years ago

   Thank you all for your support ,really appreciate your help .
   Have a nice day .

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   psycheskinnerposted 9 years ago

   A lot of your problems will be resolved when you punctuated in a conventional way.
   
   BEFORE
   Cause when using other kind of paints like the one used on painting cars ,it will destroy the foam and make it melt .,
   
   AFTER
   Because when using other kind of paints like the ones used to paint cars, it will destroy the foam and make it melt.
   
   Start each sentence with a capital letter, end with a period, have no space before the comma and one space after.
   
   Otherwise your content looks pretty good.

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      RCModelsposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you ,that's the kind of instructions that i was looking for ,
      Appreciate your help.

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   The Examiner-1posted 9 years ago

   First word of sentence is always capitalized. Other words begin with small letters, as in "We Read Every day and some times". It should be, "We read every day and some times". When you say "i" - meaning yourself - you always capitalize it, "I". You always end your sentences with a period.

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      RCModelsposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you ,Your advice was a great help to me

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   RCModelsposted 9 years ago

   At last my hubs were published ,I want to thank every one helped me ,wish you all best of luck .

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   alkanarulaposted 9 years ago

   @RCModels  I am facing the similar prob, the first hub I published ,I got a notification saying "duplicate " where as it was mine , considering I had shared the same on my blog I unpublished it , today I created another hub but its pending approval....could you tell me pl the criteria one has to follow here ? thanx

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      Vineet Dubeyposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Don't worry 'pending approval' means your hub is being evaluated by staff members. The process normally takes 6-12 hours. Once approved, your hub will be published.

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         alkanarulaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

         Oh thanx @vineet Dubey

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      RCModelsposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Hello Alkanarula,, as Vineet said wait till the evaluation finished,if it was refused, try to follow the instructions in the previews replies, by the way,if you already published your hub here previously in your blog,I think you must delete it first and wait for 8 hours till the crawler identify the deletion process.

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         pujibagusposted 9 years agoin reply to this

         ok

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         alkanarulaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you Vineet , but it got published  and  and became the editor's pick...I am so very thrilled ...My very 1st hub !

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            The Examiner-1posted 9 years agoin reply to this

            Do you mean the Editors Choice?

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               alkanarulaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

               Yooooo  bingo !!!

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                  The Examiner-1posted 9 years agoin reply to this

                  Congratulations!

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               alkanarulaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

               I am sooo v thrilled after realising what it means !

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                  The Examiner-1posted 9 years agoin reply to this

                  It is amazing that you were picked on your first Hub. :-)

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                     alkanarulaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

                     Tru tht @The Examiner , but tell me where can I most appear on the hub pages ??

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                        The Examiner-1posted 9 years agoin reply to this

                        The HubPages that I am familiar with is this link:
                        
                        http://hubpages.com/feed/
                        
                        You see this page when you sign in and see the daily stories on it. I leave that page open all of the time and I open the other pages next to that one.
                        If you accidentally close that page then go to the top of your present page and to the left it says "HubPages". Right click on that and re-open it in a separate tab.

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                           alkanarulaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

                           Oh K thanx ...@The Examiner-1...I am so v happy I made some frndz here )

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                     alkanarulaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

                     Can you please send me the link plz ??

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                        pujibagusposted 9 years agoin reply to this

                        what u mean beib

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                           alkanarulaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

                           I published a hub...I can reach it both through my profile and application page but I can only see my version Iwant to see how it appears to public and the location ...can u plzzzz help?/

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                              The Examiner-1posted 9 years agoin reply to this

                              Just look on HubPages. That is also what 'Preview' is for when you are editing.

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                                 alkanarulaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

                                 I saw it @The Examiner-1...thank you soo much and also for follow ))

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                                    The Examiner-1posted 9 years agoin reply to this

                                    My pleasure.

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            Vineet Dubeyposted 9 years agoin reply to this

            That's an extraordinary feat, congratulations. Your work is very original. I am looking forward to your upcoming hubs.

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               alkanarulaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

               Thank you so much Vineet )

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   Angel198625posted 9 years ago

   I only read the first one. Your sentence structure and grammar might need to improve a bit. Remember the capital letters as mentioned above, there are a few places missing comments, and also a few sentence fragments. I'm not trying to be mean, but sometimes articles are a little bit harder to read without proper use of the English language and proper grammar. If that's not your strongest suit, you could always hire someone to do it for you.

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      alkanarulaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you @Angel198625 for your inputs...I appreciate critics , and I totally agree with you that missing comments and framents make it ..difficult to read .. I believe I should add an audio to my hub that makes more sense ...tanx once again but I have a question to ask , you gave a critical review on my very first hub , but not one word of appreciation ,can I ask why so , is it that bad ?

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   Angel198625posted 9 years ago

   No it isn't that bad. I think the content and photos are wonderful! The question asked what was wrong so I simply put what I thought might be wrong.

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      alkanarulaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Thanx @Angek198625 your comment on my hub would be really appreciated.

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