I'd like feedback on my Hub: A MAN OF COURAGE & COMPASSION

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  1. mslizzee profile image63
    mslizzeeposted 7 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub A MAN OF COURAGE & COMPASSION. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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  2. Rupert Taylor profile image94
    Rupert Taylorposted 7 years ago

    A few issues:

    The headline should not be in all caps, but in Title Face.

    The images are unattributed. They should be free of copyright restrictions. Also, spread them out throughout your story and make them full width. If set to the right images play havoc with text on mobile devices where most of our audience is.

    You spell Mohamed two different ways.

    Hope that helps.

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    1. mslizzee profile image63
      mslizzeeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you. That is helpful.

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  3. theraggededge profile image96
    theraggededgeposted 7 years ago

    What Rupert said...

    At least one of those images has a visible copyright notice on it. You can't republish copyright images - you could be landed with a large bill.

    Your title needs to be searchable. Will people be searching for it? Doubtful.

    There are already a lot of articles about this man on the web, and your text looks like a thin rewrite. It is likely to be flagged as duplicate/copied content. I can take any sentence from your article, paste it into Google and up pop similarly written pieces. Why not write about something that you know instead of rehashing other people's work? A topic that is personal to you?

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    1. mslizzee profile image63
      mslizzeeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      thank you. I wrote about it because I was so touched by his dedication. No other reason. Not trying to prove anything.

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      1. theraggededge profile image96
        theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        Reading my message again, I'm sorry I came over as a bit harsh. I looked at some of your hubs and they are very wide and varied.

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