I'd like feedback on my article: Love_Reloaded

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   anonymoussoulposted 6 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Love_Reloaded (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Haven't looked at your article properly yet, but why have you put an underscore in the title?

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         anonymoussoulposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Actually there wasn't any url available so i had to do it

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         anonymoussoulposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Actually there wasn't any url available so i had to put it

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            theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            Well that will cause it to fail, so change the title if you need to. In any case, your title doesn't reflect the content, so maybe Young Love in India Today or something like that?

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               anonymoussoulposted 6 years agoin reply to this

               thank you mam, i will try to do it

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      Mike Hardyposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      It's a start.
      
      Consider editing down to essentials. Make a hub about 700 -1200 words.
      
      Focus your ideas/topics into clusters with sub-titles
      
      Break it up with graphics that support your topic or point.
      
      Add a poll to engage readers
      
      edit/review/repeat - even after a hub is published I can always go back ans tweak and improve.

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         anonymoussoulposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         thank you so much

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      BethanyHalbertposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Hi! At the bottom of your hub you apologize about grammar or vocabulary mistakes; if you want to make it through the QAP that's one of the main things you need to correct. You end many or your sentences with ellipses, the "..." sometimes you put three, sometimes you put four. Grammatically three should be the maximum, but even then you would do well to use them sparingly.
      It's an interesting hub and I think your personal opinions are part of what add to it. Another aspect to add if you would like to get featured are more statistics as well as your opinions. If you can find some facts online about marriage rates etc. and then link back to them that will help strengthen your article.

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         anonymoussoulposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         thank you

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            BethanyHalbertposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            You're welcome!

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   TessSchlesingerposted 6 years ago

   You need to learn to write grammatically. There are too many grammatical errors for me to mention.

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