I'd like feedback on my article: Development and Operation

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   Jency Sherlinposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Development and Operation (must be signed in to view)

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   CMHypnoposted 5 years ago

   Hi Jency, it looks like a very short hub.  Also you might want to avoid using phrases such as 'gonna rule'.   Stick to proper English and grammar.
   
   Also your title is not descriptive enough. Development and Operation of what?  Never assume your readers know what you mean - you need to hook them in

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   Rupert Taylorposted 5 years ago

   This looks as though you are promoting a business and, as such, will never be approved by HubPages.

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      FatFreddysCatposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      ^^ what he said.

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      wildernessposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Of course it is; there is even a link to that business in the first sentence.  And equally of course, it will not be permitted: Hubpages is not an advertising agency for other companies.

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   theraggededgeposted 5 years ago

   It's very keyword stuffed.

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   Jency Sherlinposted 5 years ago

   Thanks for the corrections everyone, I did corrected did and resubmitted but an I can't able to submit - It displaying as "Your article is not featured" can someone please share your ideas about it.
   
   Thank You

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      daniellepopovitsposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I would try changing the title to something more engaging, perhaps to a question. Also, I recommend doing a read through-- paying close attention to the flow of sentences and word choice. Hope that helps!

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Everything we said before still stands: grammatical errors, promotional, spammy, keyword-stuffed (no such word as 'Devops'. Too much bold text. Generic images (what is that graph anyway?).
      
      Are you here to write or promote?

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   psycheskinnerposted 5 years ago

   You are still clearly advertising Credo in the watermark and final link.  That won't fly.

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