Improving my article

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  1. Janenderitu profile image59
    Janenderituposted 10 months ago

    Thank you for the feedback on my last article, I definitely know better now. I could also use the forum's criticism on this one.

    http://hub.me/aqvT6

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    1. paolaenergya profile image90
      paolaenergyaposted 10 months agoin reply to this

      Hi, I had a quick glance during my coffee break - a few things need fixing:

      - punctuation
      - title should say Actresses not Actress
      - intro missing explaining why you chose these actresses (eg do you admire them and particularly enjoyed xyz movies they starred in?)
      - conclusions missing
      - links to sources missing (eg IMdB).

      Good luck!

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      1. Janenderitu profile image59
        Janenderituposted 10 months agoin reply to this

        Thanks, got it

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        1. theraggededge profile image87
          theraggededgeposted 10 months agoin reply to this

          Janenderitu, you don't have to unpublish each time you edit. Just go into Edit, then when finished, click Done editing. Your changes will be applied and meanwhile, readers can still access your article.

          The problem with unpublishing is that the article goes back into the review queue.

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    2. Kenna McHugh profile image93
      Kenna McHughposted 10 months agoin reply to this

      I recommend you visit the Learning Center and study and re-study the information there to get your articles approved.

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    3. WriterJanis profile image89
      WriterJanisposted 10 months agoin reply to this

      I'm getting an error page when I click your link.

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  2. Janenderitu profile image59
    Janenderituposted 10 months ago

    Am fixing some issues, you'll look at it

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    1. Miebakagh57 profile image73
      Miebakagh57posted 10 months agoin reply to this

      Okay. But did you really do as the theraggedge said? That would help your readers accessing your stuff 24/7.

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