Like so many of you out there in cyberspace, I am working on a book, several actually, and I began posting my work this week. I humbly submit my work for your reading pleasure, and open it to constructive criticism for those of you who are willing to read it. My story is a romance, and someday I hope to have it published through Harlequin, if that gives you some idea as to the style in which I am writing. Here is a quick synopsis:
It is a story about two best friends/roommates, Seth Conner and Annie Greene, who find themselves in an awkward situation after a night of movies and alcohol that leaves them questioning their friendship status.
Seth has been growing increasingly dissatisfied with his current girlfriend Cynthia, who, unbeknownst to him, is hiding several skeletons in her closet. For some reason, the worse things get with Cynthia, the more Seth finds himself attracted to Annie.
Annie has been pining for Seth for quite some time, but after that fateful night, she decides that she is tired of waiting for him to notice her. Enter Dusty Richards, a smooth talker with a few tricks up his sleeve that put Annie under his spell, and blinded her to his true intentions...
Happy reading, all! Please do not hesitate to ask me to read your work as well! Don't forget to comment!
you could also use lulu.com for self publishing. Just be sure to read their FAQ first.
by Destiny Rose 14 years ago
this guy just totally chewed me out on my angel story hub , I know there are threads about comments being rudly made on hubs , but this one is ridiculous to me , its like 3 paragraphs long and makes no sense and gee wiz its an angel story for god sake , what the hell? Not self promoting but you...
by PeeGee 13 years ago
Why does noone care enough to say what they think about what they read to the person that wrote it?I am very keen to hear some good old fashioned criticism of what I write from people that aren't my friends or significant other - how do we ever grow without being watered by reality! Please feel...
by Mohamed Farid 4 years ago
Hi and Happy New Year EveryoneI have made a quality lens on how to become a freelancer and earn money from home and i wanted you all to give me your opinions and constructive criticism, you won't be sorry and i will truly appreciate it.http://hubpages.com/hub/How-To-Earn-Mon …...
by L A Walsh 14 years ago
How to give and take constructive criticism
by Bridgett Tulloh 11 years ago
Hi - I've written my first two hubs, having completed many of the tutorials. I'd love some feedback on how I've utilized hubpages suggestions, such as creating good content, good titles, using images and links, etc. Thanks so much for your time!Bridgett
by DogSiDaed 14 years ago
Just written a (very) short story. I'm looking to try and develop a writing style that will enable me to make longer ones in future, perhaps leading to a full length book. Any criticism of the piece and what I should do to improve it is much appreciated. Thanks guys!...
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