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Jealous

Updated on February 24, 2010
wish you could be my teddy bear at night
wish you could be my teddy bear at night

jealous of the people

you hugged…

because

for a moment

they held my whole world


jealous of the people

you talked…

because

for a moment

they heard my fave song


jealous of the people

you smiled…

because

for a moment

they could had butterflies


jealous of the people

you stared…

because

for a moment

they glimpsed a little heaven


jealous of the people

you missed…

because

for a moment

they had been complete


jealous of the people

you cried…

because

for a moment

they caught my only death


most of all

jealous of someone

you love…

coz every moment

I’ve wished for

is right by her side


I am jealous

freaking jealous

and it’s so bad

that’s all I could do



© 2010-02-02  b l a i s e


See my other poems...

When You're Gone

In a Blur

4 p.m.

Whoever You are

The Killer

Y o u


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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      um jealousy? lol thank you for stopping by :)

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      Girish puri 5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      One of the most important ornament of humans....lol

      without this, we are all incomplete,

      original hub,

      thanks

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      JadedLove 6 years ago

      bes=autifully sad in a way. i know the feeling. i tell My love all of the time that i am jealous of her pillow. Cute she says. up and beautiful. Thanx for sharing your heart. Blessed be

      JLove

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Look who's back, hey Brands it's good to see you :) Looking great with your new pic my friend. I missed reading your lovely poetry. Hope I could find a new one when I get on your page :) Thanks XX

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      brandonfan 7 years ago from Mid West

      How have you been Blaise? Jealousy can really eat at our guts and turn us all into someone else. I loved this poem. Can't wait to read more!

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Thanks denden :) My brother's nickname is Den-Den ;)

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      denden mangubat 7 years ago from liloan, cebu, philippines

      nice poem

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      yup, it's normal :) I'm glad to see you Cosette

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      cosette 7 years ago

      aye, so true. we've all been there at one time or another. very nice!

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      wow, thank you Moulik! yah I will, hope to see you on my next then ;)

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      Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      WOW! So very well written, keep writing more...

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      halloo cheeky girl! yup, human nature..but too much is annoying lol Thanks my friend! I love reading yours, too..gotta visit CG's apartment ;) Say hi to Cathy!

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      Cassandra Mantis 7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Really nice poem, blaise. Jealous is a thing we all get at times. Even if it's on the list of whatever yada yada. We're only human. I always love reading your hubs! : )

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      thanks my friend :)

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      Dark Heart 7 years ago

      Wonderful.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      yeah I know I kinda exaggerated a bit lol Thanks a lot Seasoning :) I'm glad to see you

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      seasoning 7 years ago

      loved the first few lines, and then it just seemed to flow from there, nice. We all feel tinges of jealousy from time to time

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      sure it is. :) Holiday, yah it's an exciting phase...jealous, cute and sweet for me..

      happy to see you as always my friend ;)

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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      This is how love feels and it's how it feels when it takes a holiday. Thanks Blaise.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      hello Christal :)

      glad to see you here..Really? Pleasure to speak them up for you :)

      Thanks. God bless.

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      christalluna1124 7 years ago from Dallas Texas

      Blaise,

      what a beautiful and touching poem. I have felt those feelings many times. you took the words right out of my mouth.

      Warmest regards,

      chris

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      we have the same fave :) thanks bulletproof

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      bulletproofchris 7 years ago from hutchinson, ks

      my favorite is the first stanza. strong opening for the poem. good job.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      hahaha I'm afraid I could.. thanks fiksy02 :)

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      Fikayo Balogun 7 years ago from London

      very good. but you are more possesive than jealous.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Shazwellyn. Heart4dword, Dim, lctodd1947 thanks a lot guys for visiting and for the thoughts :)

      hmm I wonder if I sounded too dramatic..coz your comments express a torture. This one was originally just one stanza, and I thought twas sweet and lovely..was in the mood to continue it so there it goes.. :p

      anyway, glad to hear different views :)

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      lctodd1947 7 years ago from USA

      It is hard to have something you can't control such as jealousy. It is hard to deal with and when you lose trust in someone you much deal with it then and always wonder if they are being true.

      It is a hard emotion to deal with.

      Linda

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      Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

      Oh blaise, that was so, so good., but I feel for you. Jealousy is a very difficult emotion to deal with. Take care.x

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      heart4theword 7 years ago from hub

      Jealousy is a hard thing, in many cases it stems from abandonment issues, as a child. Thanks for sharing:)

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      shazwellyn 7 years ago from Great Britain

      Very well put. Jelousy is a torturous emotion.,.. it mainly torchures the owner of it! x

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      @hubpageswriter

      thank you! :) (it's so cheesy to me lol)

      @CM

      heya CM! thanks for liking it :)

      @Jen's Solitude

      thanks for the compliments :)

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      Jen's Solitude 7 years ago from Delaware

      Excellent expression, as usual!

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      carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      I very much like this work!!

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      hubpageswriter 7 years ago

      Awesome. I like the flow of this poem..