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The One: I Love You

Updated on July 10, 2011



Hearts are often broken

By words left unspoken



For a moment I forgot bout my heart jumping out my chest for something killing me coz now another thing was bugging me…where did I read or hear those words… I could so freaking relate. I hate it when you try to recall something and you can hardly remember…it bugs you insanely until you recall everything completely.


Sigh…


P Place was fully packed. My friends were halfway to being intoxicated. I promised myself to just have three shots of vodka and I’m done. Hell, make it four coz it’s apple…


“Oh, Blaise sweetie, you’re here!” A gorgeous friend of mine greeted me.


It’s not like once in a blue moon that I go there, but they all know why I go there. They know what it means. Though these people go there like duh it’s home. They’re my friends, and I’m a friend who doesn’t contradict, just supports. I mean, it’s their lives, they breathe the air they breathe. And they’re freaking old enough.


Watching them dancing and going crazy changed my mood a bit. The club’s magic…makes anyone forgets what she has to forget.


“Taste this tequila, honey…it makes sweet dreams.” My best friend, Ana, offered me.

“Whoa, hot!”


Tonight was different. I wasn’t there upset nor had a little LQ. Tonight was badly heartbreaking because tonight everything was over. I was signing off to being attached. Well at least it’s what I know for now.


“What’s your request for tonight, hon?” Ana asked while scribbling something in a white little paper.

“So sick of love songs, I dunno.”

“Neyo’s?!”

“Nah! Ok, put in there Brown Eyes by Lady Gaga. So everyone will sit for a while.” I said sounding funny.


Moments later, the band played my request…


In your brown eyes …I walked away…In your brown eyes…Couldn't stay…


Nice song, it was squeezing my heart line by line. Everyone was swaying their hands in the air. I just stayed there standing still, letting the music stab me deep inside…and then someone in my back wrapped his hands on my waist.


“I love you. I want my babies have your brown eyes.” His lips murmured in my ear.

That voice…I could die tonight without hearing it.

“I love you…I’m sorry.” I uttered.


I know he’s the one…

The one…

That they say…


There's always gonna be that one person that no matter how long it's been or how badly they've treated you, if they say I love you,,,you'll always say it back...





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                         The One: Kiss Back

                         The One...That Got Away

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    • carolina muscle profile image

      carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      I love this... it's great!!!

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      thanks CM, hope you read the first one ;p

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      CiscoPixie 7 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all?

      amazing..

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      thank you Ash! :)

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      Justine76 7 years ago

      uhhh...Im speechless, or typeless....ouch.

      "Nice song, it was squeezing my heart line by line." I have whole playlists of these songs...

    • Micky Dee profile image

      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      Great thoughts. Thanks again Blaise!

    • uliveulearn profile image

      uliveulearn 7 years ago from Canada

      Very emotional and moving.....good stuff

    • CoCoa_81 profile image

      CoCoa_81 7 years ago from Shreveport, Louisiana

      That is so very true. I really feel you on that, thanx!

    • Dim Flaxenwick profile image

      Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

      Big bubble of emotion, perfectly put into words. Loved it. Take care x

    • I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      Ahh, so very sweet, blaise! :) There is some steam streaming from this page for sure. The vid and your new avatar suggest that things are getting a bit spicy.

      "Hearts are often broken

      By words left unspoken"

      How true it that?! I'd be willig to bet it breaks more hearts than the ones broken by what is said. ;)

      Lovely hub

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      Cassandra Mantis 7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Hy Blaise: Love the new avatar. Love this hub. Nice to see new thing being tried. I like the angle, not feeling like fitting in, or things working right then bang, something happens and things change. Life is like that.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      @Justine – Hi! I’m glad to see you here :) Like the song, too..the only song I like from Gaga LOL Yea, the song squeeze..but like it anyway ;p Thanks!

      @Mik – thanks for dropping by :) My Micky rocks!

      @uliveulearn –I like your shades! Thanks :)

      @CoCoa – nice meetin you! Hmm, nice name..coCoa ;p Thank you!

      @Dim – I would blow bubbles more for you :) Thank you for always being here. TC :)

      @Invictus – you aren’t only a brilliant poet but a good psychic.. ;p Yeah steam streaming and more bubble of emotions..hmm I like that ;p

      Oh Ow...were you in my best friend’s body a while ago? How’d you know that?! LOL Thanks, Invictus!

      @Cheeky Girl – Heya my Cheeky friend! Glad you loved it..hmm I wonder what you’re gonna say on the next one ;)

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      The IGNITER vs Corrupted Governments 7 years ago from The U.S. Government protects Nazi War Criminals

      Ohhhhhh you really are loving someone very much :)

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      yea I told you Ghost.. ;p

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      The IGNITER vs Corrupted Governments 7 years ago from The U.S. Government protects Nazi War Criminals

      Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww that's so sweet--and you know how long it has been since I was in love? Sooooooooooooo long and I loved that feeling so much! Love is so good isn't it Blaise? :)

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Nah, how long? yep, I love the feeling, too...like eating chocolate? LOL

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      Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      This is excellent writing to tread, well done...

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Moulik, hey! Thank you for the excellent comments :)

    • I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      Hmmm... I know a secret ;)

      btw ~ maybe you could let your friend know to 'put up or shut up'! LOL ;p

      Here's a song for you

      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GlZxZ2n2zpw

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Can I know? I love secrets.. ;)

      She's silent now..coz im listenin to the song..Love this one from Colbie..

      "If you just realize what I just realized..."

      Thank you my sweet Invictus! :)

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      Justine76 7 years ago

      As for Lady G goes, I also like poker face. ;)

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      brown eyes, good song, nice hub

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Hello Justine! How are you? Poker face is good ;) And the hidden meaning of the song was really intriguing :)

      Hi Poet! love the songs in your hubs, too ;)

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      prasetio30 7 years ago from malang-indonesia

      That's why I love this hub. You impressed me much. Thanks

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Thank you very much Prasetio :)

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      dotty1 6 years ago from In my world

      love this gorgeous writing. :)

    • dotty1 profile image

      dotty1 6 years ago from In my world

      love this gorgeous writing. :)

    • blaise25 profile image
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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Ok, I believe you Dotty, you said it twice lol Thank you. It's nice meeting you :)

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      Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

      Brilliant!

    • Micky Dee profile image

      Micky Dee 6 years ago

      Step lightly my dear! Thank you Blaise!

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      Dark Heart 6 years ago

      Your words are nimble,able to stop on a dime,twirl and kick the reader right in the face.I love it.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      So emotional and truly amazing.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

      Just had to come back to this on. That one person no matter how long, or how bad they´ve treated you, . If they say I love you, you´ll always say it back,.. Cutting me like a knife that quote is today.

      Love you and all your work. You know that.

      Dim xxxxxxxxx

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      omfg..that quote yeah.. :)

      likewise, Dim. Love you always XOXO

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      Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

      love comes and goes...and sometimes it comes back...

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Indeed..

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