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The One…That Got Away

Updated on September 1, 2011


I can’t think of nowhere I’d rather be

than under this sky with you

maybe I don’t want this night to end

and maybe I don’t want you to stop thinking about me…



Somewhere between chances and time I’ve met you. At first, I never really knew your name…so on my own, I called you Fudgee. I so love hot fudge sundae! No matter what, a hot fudge sundae could draw a smile on my face. That’s what you made me feel…in the middle of my uninteresting life, surprisingly the vanilla was whipped with fudge.


One day you talked to me. So you were real. And your name, close to an angel…suddenly I found myself writing your name.


You caught me again. You really caught me coz I realized I wanted to talk to you again.


I was still afraid to fly. I kinda sensed you know why. Yet I fell…I fell insanely in love with you.


We were lovers lying down on the grass gazing the same star at night. The same star and sky but never was the grass. How I wished I could kiss your lips but darn it I couldn’t even touch your fingertips.


The sparks were flying…some rain and sunshine…but you chose to break my heart.


I tried everything not to think about you. Though I could still feel my heart beating your every part. I did have my what ifs but I knew I should stop thinking of what could have been.


One day you smiled at me. I was so confused…I missed the vanilla with fudge…I really wanted so much to melt with you…But with that frost, my heart was melting away seeing yours melting away.


Now you’re here, baby… No matter what I do, I always forget to forget you.


I can’t think of nowhere I’d rather be than under this sky with you. Maybe I don’t want this night to end…and maybe I don’t want you to stop thinking about me…


You, the one…


The one that got away…


When would this end….


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    • carolina muscle profile image

      carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      I missed the vanilla with the fudge.. the melting.. I love the way you use words!!! Nice work!!

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Thanks CM :) Nice avatar

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      The IGNITER vs Corrupted Governments 7 years ago from The U.S. Government protects Nazi War Criminals

      A hot fudge sundae could draw a smile on my face too.. ;)

      Awwwwwwwww use in love XXXXXXXX00000000000000

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Oh yeah? LOL can I ask some of your chocolates?

      Awwwwwwwwww THANKS GHOST :) XXXXXOOOOOOOOO

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      The IGNITER vs Corrupted Governments 7 years ago from The U.S. Government protects Nazi War Criminals

      I think you are too cute and you can have as many of my chocolates as you want--just save one itty bitty piece for me sweety! (((((((HUGS))))))))))))))

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      I want the ones melting....like nutella....thanks for always letting me in your choco factory ;) You're awesome Ghost!

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      Ooo, this is yummy! :) and nutella melts soo nicely too! Love the song.. Hmm, so they were lost and came back??? Is that right? :)

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Loved the song so much that never get sick of hearing it ;) Came back? **sigh..maybe...or maybe not at all..but still so lost..the lovely shooting star just came too late..I missed the perfect night.

      Thanks Invictus! Im so glad to see you :) I'm so excited for your secret saga :)

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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      Thanks Blaise. This is a great hub. Your writing is so full of love. Ah- to be swimming in nutella!

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      uneder the same sky, lovely, i like this poem so much.

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      Dark Heart 7 years ago

      We can never really explain why these things happen,can we?

      And yes,it is a lot like melting.I liked this piece.Thank you.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

      Touched my heart as you so often do. Thanks for sharing such beautiful words.x

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      @Mik – How are you? Thanks a lot for the great comments. Um swimming in nutella? ;p Yum!

      @Poet – you are just so lovely! Thank you :)

      @DH – Yep we can’t ;) and with things like this, who needs an explanation LOL Thanks so much my good friend.

      @Dim – Hi, Dim! Glad to see you. Your hubs are as beautiful as your heart. Thanks :)

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      sophs 7 years ago

      This is beautiful and so moving! Great work blaise :)

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      Cassandra Mantis 7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Hy Blaise: getting ready to go out for the evening. Just caught this here. What an Uber cool Hub here! I just love the poetry and the prose intermix. It reminds me of summers and fudge sundaes are a fave with me. You are Ace! Mwah!

      You Rock! CG

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      David Lim 7 years ago from Singapore

      Just trying out the new hub hopping feature and I found myself here. Great hub and you got yourself a fan. :)

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      @Sophs – Hello, Sophs! Thank you. Just read your runaway bride hub, liked it :)

      @CG – Hey Cheeky! Yea sometimes I don’t notice I kinda intermix.. ;) Wow that’s a great compliment moi friend..A big thanks for you! Team Cheeky rocks, too! XO

      @Wandererh – Hi! Yea that hub hopping feature is cool! Thanks HP! Another brilliant thing! Thank you, Wandererh for dropping by and being a fan :)

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      Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      Lovely writing, Blaise, enjoyed it very much...

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Thanks a lot for reading, Moulik! Glad you enjoyed it. Love your poems :)

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      Karen Russell 7 years ago

      EXCELLENT! THANK YOU FOR SHARING...

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      thank you my friend :) TC

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      cosette 7 years ago

      i like this. and the image you chose too. very nice, Blaise.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Ow, thank you Cosette for the nice comments :)

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      Kavita Trivedi 6 years ago from London

      This piece is so cute! You got me craving a fudge sundae now! :)

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Thanks for reading Kavita. I'll be on your page later :) Enjoy your sundae

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      "I really wanted so much to melt with you...No matter what I do, I always forget to forget you." Lovely Fehl, I have felt the same for someone who got away. great series so far!

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Aw, going back here, that's beautiful..makes me go back in time..What if the one that got away came back? Thanks, heartyfly! That's my name for you now coz I love your default. You missed "The One I love You"

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      haha heartyfly. mmk.

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      oh no i didnt miss it. i just didnt comment on that one. Ill get right to it!

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      lol mmk

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      The original Eman 5 years ago from london

      This is really nice .I'm a big fan of hot fudge so bring that imagery into your poem was cool. check out my new piece 'the dream that got away' and let me know what you think :)

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Thank you Eman. Ok, I'll check it out :)

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Awe, Fehl, this is really sweet =) The expressions you use are so vivid and it melts me away little by little =)

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      Fehl Dungo 4 years ago from close to you...

      awww like a hot fudge sundae? :D

      You rock Max!

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