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Unequalled Love - Original Sad Poem

Updated on March 23, 2012


In my room, besides my bed

They’ll find many pages, crumbled to death

I was often found with a pen, blank pages

And thoughts of you

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There is a garden seldom blossoms


A pair of flowers never happy


They miss their happiness, sunshine,


blooming petals and the scent of you.


In between the dawn and the twilight

Your memories illuminating the half-light

Is a sight to witness, when gather;

A river, some pebbles and dreams of you.


Perfect, flawless and serene

Matchless and ideal that have always been

Though lacking and missing now

Some cuddles, hugs, kisses and you.

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We are not together,


Courtesy of an unequalled love


The only things that are left behind now


Some paints, a canvas, your face and me.

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      WD Curry 111 5 years ago from Space Coast

      This is a beautiful poem with wonderful, pertinent images and a sophisticated layout with decorative devices. Nice!

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      Linda Bilyeu 5 years ago from Orlando, FL

      Awwww too sweet! Beautiful words and photos!! This poem has my votes!:)

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      Daisy Mariposa 5 years ago from Orange County (Southern California)

      Hunbbel,

      The imagery created by the words in your poem is beautiful. The photographs you included were perfect. I enjoyed reading this very much.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 6 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @Uzma: I am really glad that you liked it.

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      Uzma Shaheen Bhatti 6 years ago from Lahore,Pakistan

      "We are not together,

      Courtesy of an unequalled love

      The only things that are left behind now

      Some paints, a canvas, your face and me."

      awsome lines..I am speechless.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 6 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @Homesteadbound: You are very few of those fellow hubbers who really judge a hub on its merit and goes deep inside to find the actual meaning of those words and phrases and that is why I really adore you. Thank you so much for being a wonderful part of my writing journey. :)

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      Cindy Murdoch 6 years ago from Texas

      This was really great! It left a lump in my throat. I liked the phrases you used: crumbled to death,the scent of you, and then your last line "The only things that are left behind now Some paints, a canvas, your face and me." This last line was the summation of loss that the lover felt, such sadness, grief, loss, and emptiness - having to accept the finality of their fate.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 6 years ago from Nepal

      Crumbled pages, blank pages: these two images caught my attention. Good writing.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 6 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @lostwithinmyself: Thank you :)

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      lostwithinmyself 6 years ago

      Very well written. X

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 6 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @Kaynelson: Thank you for stopping by and providing me your feed back. Really appreciate your comments :)

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      kaynelson 6 years ago

      this is very well written. great job!

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 6 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      Thank you Deborah-Diane. Your kind words made my day :)

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      Deborah-Diane 6 years ago from Orange County, California

      Lovely, lovely poem. I'm glad HubPages provides an opportunity to read poetry like yours.

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      Movie Master 6 years ago from United Kingdom

      It's a lovely poem and I too am glad it's only a poem.

      Great writing, thank you.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 6 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @Rosemay50: Thank you so much for stopping by and conveying your appreciations to me. I am glad that you liked my poem :)

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      Rosemary Sadler 6 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      A beautiful poem.

      The only things that are left behind now

      Some paints, a canvas, your face and me.

      These words convey so much. I too am pleased it is only a poem.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 6 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @Paradise7: Thank you so much, I am glad that you loved another of my poem :)

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      Paradise7 6 years ago from Upstate New York

      It is a lovely poem, full of artistry and yearning. Somehow those two things go together.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 6 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @ubanichijioke: Thank you so much for your kind words. A comment of appreciation from such a beautiful poet as you, is indeed an honour for me.

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 6 years ago from Lagos

      A sweet lovely poem. Adorable is the word. Voted awesome

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 6 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @homesteadbound: Thank you so much for the kind words :)

      Although, for me, it is just a poem; for many people it could be a true lament of a love lost and they could relate to it. I hope everybody live with peace and love.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 6 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @Apruva: Thank you, so sweet of you :)

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 6 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @Writer 20: Thank you for stopping by and giving a feedback :) I am glad that you liked it :)

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      Cindy Murdoch 6 years ago from Texas

      It was a touching poem. I am truly gald to read that is only a poem, and not a true lament of a love lost with all the pain that would bring.

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      apurva joshi 6 years ago from INDIA

      beautifully written. awesome work...

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      Joyce Haragsim 6 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Great lovely poem you have written here and I'm happy to read that is only a poem.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 6 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @Lucky Cats: It is just a poem and not a lament :P

      It is such a privilege that many a times, people ask me the same questions. I am starting to feel a bit more proudy :P lol.

      Thank you so much for your comment :)

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      Kathy 6 years ago from The beautiful Napa Valley, California

      Oh, ouch! this one hurts. I hope it is only a poem and not a lament for lost love. Very compelling.

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