Man ,woman , water and sun..........

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   ahorsebackposted 8 years ago

   
   
   I walked her from behind as she moved
   sensually into the surf
   she did not know but I observed her in hunger
   as we crossed the sandy turf
   
   both of us near naked but for our desperations
   I took her shoulders and began to massage
   she turn and lowered her head
   like a mare in dressage
   
   My hands lowered to her waist my fingers
   wiping beads of water from flesh
   that's when she turned to me arms at my neck
   our fingers enmeshed
   
   And lifting her to my waist we entered the deep
   as I entered her  we  became one
   long  after the liquid reality of two souls entwined
   we came again and again in the sun

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      Kathryn L Hillposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      We noticed not her mother
      ~ and her brother
      strolling there at noon.
      
      Yes, on the beach, they found us
      ~ came upon us
      as they hiked upon the dunes.
      
      Her brother laughed quite oddly
      ~ at our naked bodies
      as they quickly rushed away.
      
      What started out so greatly
      ~ no thought of privacy
      had become a rather embarrassing day!
      
      

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         ahorsebackposted 8 years agoin reply to this

         Ha HA , Kathryn !   Nice change up !

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            colorfuloneposted 8 years agoin reply to this

            It is a nice transition.    Love the beginning, too.
            I read it earlier but haven't put on my poet's hat.

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               ahorsebackposted 8 years agoin reply to this

               Oh go ahead add something funny , its killing you isn't it ?.....lol

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         colorfuloneposted 8 years agoin reply to this

         Man, nine months later ...
         
         The woman looks like she ate a gator
         
         A popping sound and water breaks
         
         The sun shines when baby awakes! 
         
         

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            ahorsebackposted 8 years agoin reply to this

            Oh no ! or.......... Oh Yea !

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   Kathryn L Hillposted 8 years ago

   Take two:
   A better back drop for our main characters:
   
   On the sands of Costa Rica,
   our beach house white and gleaming
   our picnic basket full of wine
   our too-tan faces beaming.
   
   Retired in Costa Rica
   happily hiding here
   just us two, all alone ...
   (didn't she bring some beer?)
   
   Oh, we love Costa Rica
   We have so much fun
   what more could we possibly want?
   man, woman, water, sun!
   
   Yes?

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      ahorsebackposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Yes....... Kathryn . perfect !

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      colorfuloneposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Glimmer of water
      
      evening sun rays rising
      
      de vacaciones ~
      
      (Spanish: from vacation)

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         ahorsebackposted 8 years agoin reply to this

         I like that .......Vacaciones  !

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   Kathryn L Hillposted 8 years ago

   Costa Rica, home no more.
   She left me, sadly, on the shore.
   Why, I really cannot say
   Nothing I could do to make her stay.
   My mare, she left me a message
   No longer was she in dressage.
   But, I won't be here all alone ...
   Las mujeres aman las vacaciones!

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