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Man ,woman , water and sun..........

  1. ahorseback profile image80
    ahorsebackposted 21 months ago

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    I walked her from behind as she moved
    sensually into the surf
    she did not know but I observed her in hunger
    as we crossed the sandy turf

    both of us near naked but for our desperations
    I took her shoulders and began to massage
    she turn and lowered her head
    like a mare in dressage

    My hands lowered to her waist my fingers
    wiping beads of water from flesh
    that's when she turned to me arms at my neck
    our fingers enmeshed

    And lifting her to my waist we entered the deep
    as I entered her  we  became one
    long  after the liquid reality of two souls entwined
    we came again and again in the sun

    1. Kathryn L Hill profile image80
      Kathryn L Hillposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      We noticed not her mother
      ~ and her brother
      strolling there at noon.

      Yes, on the beach, they found us
      ~ came upon us
      as they hiked upon the dunes.

      Her brother laughed quite oddly
      ~ at our naked bodies
      as they quickly rushed away.

      What started out so greatly
      ~ no thought of privacy
      had become a rather embarrassing day! yikes

      lol

      1. ahorseback profile image80
        ahorsebackposted 21 months agoin reply to this

        Ha HA , Kathryn !   Nice change up !

        1. colorfulone profile image84
          colorfuloneposted 21 months agoin reply to this

          It is a nice transition.  smile  Love the beginning, too.
          I read it earlier but haven't put on my poet's hat.

          1. ahorseback profile image80
            ahorsebackposted 21 months agoin reply to this

            Oh go ahead add something funny , its killing you isn't it ?.....lol

      2. colorfulone profile image84
        colorfuloneposted 21 months agoin reply to this

        Man, nine months later ...

        The woman looks like she ate a gator

        A popping sound and water breaks

        The sun shines when baby awakes! 

        tongue

        1. ahorseback profile image80
          ahorsebackposted 21 months agoin reply to this

          Oh no ! or.......... Oh Yea !

  2. Kathryn L Hill profile image80
    Kathryn L Hillposted 21 months ago

    Take two:
    A better back drop for our main characters:

    On the sands of Costa Rica,
    our beach house white and gleaming
    our picnic basket full of wine
    our too-tan faces beaming.

    Retired in Costa Rica
    happily hiding here
    just us two, all alone ...
    (didn't she bring some beer?)

    Oh, we love Costa Rica
    We have so much fun
    what more could we possibly want?
    man, woman, water, sun!

    Yes?

    1. ahorseback profile image80
      ahorsebackposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Yes....... Kathryn . perfect !

    2. colorfulone profile image84
      colorfuloneposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Glimmer of water

      evening sun rays rising

      de vacaciones ~

      (Spanish: from vacation)

      1. ahorseback profile image80
        ahorsebackposted 21 months agoin reply to this

        I like that .......Vacaciones  !

  3. Kathryn L Hill profile image80
    Kathryn L Hillposted 21 months ago

    Costa Rica, home no more.
    She left me, sadly, on the shore.
    Why, I really cannot say
    Nothing I could do to make her stay.
    My mare, she left me a message
    No longer was she in dressage.
    But, I won't be here all alone ...
    Las mujeres aman las vacaciones!

 
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