Horror question.

  1. brimancandy profile image81
    brimancandyposted 20 months ago

    I'm writing a book about a haunted guest house. It is a combination of ghosts, and very bad things happening to it's guests, up to and including them strangely vanishing while staying there. The story mainly revolves around what has happened to the people who have vanished.

    My question is that there is some degree of torture in my story, and some sexual situations. So, my question is, what would you think would be going too far as violence goes. I will tell you that there are no children in my story. Everyone involved is an adult.

    I'm debating on making it a two part book, where the first part deals with the vanishing, and the second part deals with the reality of what was discovered through the first part. I currently have 13 chapters, and 117 pages written.

    I'm also curious as to what would be too long?