Final Line ~ a poem by Brenda Arledge

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   Misbah786posted 3 years ago

   Brenda published a lovely and meaningful poem today, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
   
   Have we made the proper decisions, or do we need to start over before it's too late? This is an important thought to ponder because we frequently neglect to look back at what we've done and whether we're heading in the right way. It's never too late to pause and reflect. There is always a new day, and you can always wipe the slate clear and begin over. I enjoyed the wonderful videos and quotes as well
   
   Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem, Bredz
   
   For anyone who haven't read it yet here's the link: https://discover.hubpages.com/literatur … inish-Line
   
   I apologize for the mistake in the title. It was supposed to be Finish line, not final line.
   
   Brenda, I hope you'll forgive me for this blunder. I am unable to edit the title of the forum

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      Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Misbah
      We often take time for granted.
      Make sure to look back and change things before it's too late.

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         Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

         True!

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years ago

   Misbah
   No problem...I'm sure it will actually help grab the attention of others.
   
   Final...sounds more drastic than Finish.
   
   I'm delighted you enjoyed this poem & took so much meaning from it.
   
   It is Never Too Late to wipe that slate clean or adjust a few things.
   
   Have a great weekend & thank you for starting this discussion.
   
   Bredz

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years ago

   Misbah
   The title is no biggie, because you can list a link to the article you are discussing.
   
   And might I say...
   You really understood these words.

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      Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Bredz, you are so sweet. Thank you!
      Blessings and Love to you

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   Treshtyposted 3 years ago

   Thanks for sharing the link my dear sis! Kisses!!!!
   
   What a question! If we know how to live like as if this will be our last, how simple our definition of life would be. However mistakes teach us lessons too, but lessons really hurt isn't.
   
   We should really change the way we live if there's something needed to change we should do it right now.
   
   Sending I love yous and super power hugs Ms Brenda!!!!!!!!

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      Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Chrish
      You don't know how much I need those Power Hugs...keep them coming this week.
      So glad you enjoyed reading this one.
      We should always look around, pay attention to details and see if there's anything we need to change.
      
      Have a great day.

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   Peggy Wposted 3 years ago

   I like the idea of a clean slate, both in this life, and the next.  Good work, Brenda, and thanks for sharing it, Misbah.  Happy Sunday to you both!

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      Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Peggy
      Thank you for reading my work.
      I'd like to think we can make life good.

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