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  1. prateek rustagi profile image61
    prateek rustagiposted 7 years ago

    We face challenges and fight too.

    We sometimes win, and then celebrate, trying to push our souls to a stable state.

    But when we fall,

    We get agonized by the realization of successful people,

    Extremely agitated by the higher standing world.

    But humans are born to exhibit courage,

    We stand up and fight again for the lost ground.

    This time, vengeance added to our armory.

    We face restrains, counter attacks and what not?

    But we never look behind.

    Why is it so?

    Why don't we hesitate to give the battle, our all?

    It is coz

    whenever we fall, our outer-ware gets melted by the heat of failure

    & coats our inner-self.

    It shields us from the preposterous world, its expectations.

    & finally we are left with no option but to hear our enclosed soul,

    which is now coated safe from the harsh world.

    It tells us to go out, follow the ever bubbling heart,

    be brave,

    we have nothing to lose.

    We have tasted defeat and mockery cannot humiliate the one already bogged down.

    We hence become brave,

    not afraid to experiment,

    no pressure anymore to hold on the gained title.

    Finally, we get up and overcome the blizzard,

    thereby freeing our enclosed soul.

    But with failure roaming nearby,

    it will get covered again.

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      eternaltreasuresposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      why do you need to have big spaces between your sentences?

  2. prateek rustagi profile image61
    prateek rustagiposted 7 years ago

    well, there wasn't any special reason 4 that, by mistake perhaps, but how did u liked d poem ??

  3. Pearldiver profile image81
    Pearldiverposted 7 years ago

    d poem mon is breathtaking!

    Da reader must to take so many deep gasps between the lines yikes