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My gardian Angel is my best friend! - Grace (is her name)

  1. sassychic profile image60
    sassychicposted 8 years ago

    Here is a Poem that I have written for a contest for a scholarship to a Arts Camp in Chicago!

    My Gardian Angel is My Best Friend!

    My Gardian Angel sits secretly on my shoulder
    She crosses her fingers, while my tears linger

    She says a prayer when life isnt fair
    My gardian angel cheers for the best and helps me beats the worst
    I love her even when things dont go the way they were rehearsed

    Life is a puzzle, Grace is there to turn the piece into place
    My gardian angel lifts my spirits in hard times
    She seems to always know whats on my mind!

    When my heart is hurting so is she
    Together Grace and I are on a misson to find pure happiness and Joy!
    Bring this to reality
    Bring peace with it!

    In the end we (Grace and I) hope the final tears are Joyful ones.



    Anyway this is a poem that I wrote and I am hoping you guys can give me feedback about it!
    This is the rough draft the final draft is only one of three I need to complete for the application for teh scholarship! Please post your ideas and comments for me to read!

    There are also illistrations to go with this poem. I am making a book (this is required). the book will have all three poems and pictures for each one.

    Thank You!
    ~Sassy!

  2. jimmythejock profile image84
    jimmythejockposted 8 years ago

    Hey Sassychic great poem, wouldnt it be better if you published it as a hub?.....jimmy

  3. sassychic profile image60
    sassychicposted 8 years ago

    What do you mean.
    Like leave it for people as a topic to comment on or what? Im confused. I just joined a matter of like a week or so agao maybe longer but Im new to this. Um yeah I dont know how or what to do. ????????????????????????????

  4. jimmythejock profile image84
    jimmythejockposted 8 years ago

    Hi Sassy, Hubpages is a publishing site where you publish articles in what are called hubs, it is not a forum.
    you are signed into your account so what you do next is click on the red arrow on the home page and click on start a new hub, when you get in there you will find text capsules where you write your articles picture capsules where you can add pictures  and other capsules into which you can add other things.
    hope that helps.....jimmy

  5. sassychic profile image60
    sassychicposted 8 years ago

    Thanks LOTS! I will try it and see If I can get it to work!

    SWEET!

  6. jimmythejock profile image84
    jimmythejockposted 8 years ago

    good luck sassy have fun.....jimmy

  7. sassychic profile image60
    sassychicposted 8 years ago

    THanks! It worked I was wondering what that stuff was about. Thanks for the help!

 
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