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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Types Of Women At The Club

  1. leaf erikson profile image61
    leaf eriksonposted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Types Of Women At The Club (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. SmartAndFun profile image92
      SmartAndFunposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

      You forgot skanks and hoes. Add those sections and see what happens.

      1. calculus-geometry profile image86
        calculus-geometryposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

        He he, and don't forget about the cougars.

        1. SmartAndFun profile image92
          SmartAndFunposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

          Ha ha yeah, and troons and THOTs.

    2. theraggededge profile image94
      theraggededgeposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

      You might be overlooking the fact that the majority of the Quality Assessment people are probably women. Therefore, they are unlikely to approve your hub. An article that treats women as some sort of commodity or entertainment for a bunch of immature man-children is not the kind of writing HP is looking for.

  2. Will Apse profile image89
    Will Apseposted 4 weeks ago

    Is this another Trump thing?

    1. DrMark1961 profile image90
      DrMark1961posted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

      Not sure, but if we have four years of this kind of hub to look forward to, I think I will stop visiting Hubpages, bro.

  3. firstcookbooklady profile image80
    firstcookbookladyposted 4 weeks ago

    So, majority rules? Delete, delete, delete...

  4. FatFreddysCat profile image93
    FatFreddysCatposted 4 weeks ago

    That whole Jersey Shore-goombah thing is so 2012.

  5. Rupert Taylor profile image94
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 weeks ago

    What they all said. Completely inappropriate drivel.

  6. Chriswillman90 profile image92
    Chriswillman90posted 4 weeks ago

    There was something oddly comedic to this article that I got a kick from. Maybe that's what the focus should be on and you'll get better results. Also the article is way too short, there's not enough visual/media content, poor formatting, and is likely too crude for this site.

    1. SmartAndFun profile image92
      SmartAndFunposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

      Ha, me, too. I think "leaf" could add more sections and more photos, and maybe move it to the humor category.

 
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