I'd like feedback on my Hub: China's Commercial Bike Sharing Services

  1. ehonhdouzi profile image68
    ehonhdouziposted 4 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub China's Commercial Bike Sharing Services. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jason mackenzie profile image88
      Jason mackenzieposted 4 months ago in reply to this

      Hi, I observed lots of grammatical errors in your article. For example, your introductory sentence - If you are travelling or working in China.... - too long and winding with errors in tense. How about breaking it down into 2 sentences and write both correctly? Thanks, regards...

 
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