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Add a line story... Who wants to play?

  1. ThoughtfulSpot profile image83
    ThoughtfulSpotposted 7 years ago

    I remember doing these as kids, and thought it would be a fun distraction during the hectic holiday season.  Everyone adds one line to the story.  Every now and then I'll try (or someone else can too if they feel the urge) to copy and paste all the story lines into a post so its easier to read. Here goes...


    "Ella walked away from the party with an odd look on her face."

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      Dinah Leeposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      She walked out the front door and saw a young man, sitting on the porch swing

  2. Laura du Toit profile image91
    Laura du Toitposted 7 years ago

    She had never expected to see a sight like that anywhere

  3. kirstenblog profile image77
    kirstenblogposted 7 years ago

    She was a nice girl and was going to have no part in the filthy going ons of this party!

  4. Wendi M profile image83
    Wendi Mposted 7 years ago

    Then suddenly, something stopped her in her tracks!

  5. BEAUTYBABE profile image85
    BEAUTYBABEposted 7 years ago

    She looked behind her and suddenly from out of the shadows she saw someone walking towards her in the dark.

  6. kirstenblog profile image77
    kirstenblogposted 7 years ago

    This stranger made her skin tingle and come out in goose bumps. What power did this stranger wield to affect her so?

  7. Bovine Currency profile image60
    Bovine Currencyposted 7 years ago

    Then she realised...

  8. habee profile image89
    habeeposted 7 years ago

    She recognized the shape, the unique walk, the profile...where had she seen it before?

    1. tantrum profile image60
      tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      and then she remembered ! the freakiest night of her life !

  9. Bovine Currency profile image60
    Bovine Currencyposted 7 years ago

    "and...where are my pants!?"

    1. tantrum profile image60
      tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      lol
      you're ruining the suspense  !

  10. Bovine Currency profile image60
    Bovine Currencyposted 7 years ago

    "oh, there they are, I am wearing them... I shouldn't have dropped so much acid."

    1. kirstenblog profile image77
      kirstenblogposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Those '60's flash backs are really taking their toll on ella....

  11. Bovine Currency profile image60
    Bovine Currencyposted 7 years ago

    She suddenly realised the echoing self commentary in her head... her nightmare had become reality.  Ella was a parody of the postmodern apocalypse.

  12. ThoughtfulSpot profile image83
    ThoughtfulSpotposted 7 years ago

    Ok - Here's a compilation of the first couple of posts... my, my this is going in a direction I didn't see coming. lol.


    Ella walked away from the party with an odd look on her face. She had never expected to see a sight like that anywhere
    She was a nice girl and was going to have no part in the filthy going ons of this party!
    Then suddenly, something stopped her in her tracks!
    She looked behind her and suddenly from out of the shadows she saw someone walking towards her in the dark.
    This stranger made her skin tingle and come out in goose bumps. What power did this stranger wield to affect her so?
    Then she realised...
    She recognized the shape, the unique walk, the profile...where had she seen it before?
    "and...where are my pants!?"
    "oh, there they are, I am wearing them... I shouldn't have dropped so much acid."
    Those '60's flash backs are really taking their toll on ella....
    She suddenly realised the echoing self commentary in her head... her nightmare had become reality.  Ella was a parody of the postmodern apocalypse.

  13. ThoughtfulSpot profile image83
    ThoughtfulSpotposted 7 years ago

    Thank God she had completed that 12 step program; she was never going to be that person again.

    1. cheaptrick profile image75
      cheaptrickposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      I missed the last two steps.
      What are they?

  14. pennee profile image61
    penneeposted 7 years ago

    She pondered this whilst taking her gun from her pocket.

  15. K Partin profile image60
    K Partinposted 7 years ago

    He seemed confused,"this isn't a slide" he said!

  16. ThoughtfulSpot profile image83
    ThoughtfulSpotposted 7 years ago

    Ok, we've gotten a bit confused here... I've got 2 stories going off of the first line.  K. Partin and Dinah Lee... You guys jumped back and started off of the original line instead of the latest added... Here's the story so far w/ the last line someone added in CAPS if you want to try again.

    Ella walked away from the party with an odd look on her face. She had never expected to see a sight like that anywhere
    She was a nice girl and was going to have no part in the filthy going ons of this party!
    Then suddenly, something stopped her in her tracks!
    She looked behind her and suddenly from out of the shadows she saw someone walking towards her in the dark.
    This stranger made her skin tingle and come out in goose bumps. What power did this stranger wield to affect her so?
    Then she realised...
    She recognized the shape, the unique walk, the profile...where had she seen it before?
    "and...where are my pants!?"
    "oh, there they are, I am wearing them... I shouldn't have dropped so much acid."
    Those '60's flash backs are really taking their toll on ella....
    She suddenly realised the echoing self commentary in her head... her nightmare had become reality.  Ella was a parody of the postmodern apocalypse.
    Thank God she had completed that 12 step program; she was never going to be that person again.
    SHE PONDERED THIS WHILST TAKING HER GUN FROM HER POCKET.

    1. K Partin profile image60
      K Partinposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Only to find out it wasn't her gun but a lighter!

  17. shazwellyn profile image83
    shazwellynposted 7 years ago

    It reminded her that her joint was in the other pocket and pondered.....

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    Denno66posted 7 years ago

    what did I do with my tissues?

  19. shazwellyn profile image83
    shazwellynposted 7 years ago

    Then she remembered and giggled to herself.

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    Denno66posted 7 years ago

    she then looked to the street sign ahead...

  21. maudine_05 profile image60
    maudine_05posted 7 years ago

    "Goodness! what a fool I've been..."

  22. shazwellyn profile image83
    shazwellynposted 7 years ago

    She giggled outloud.

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    Denno66posted 7 years ago

    "I've chosen the wrong street again", she chuckled.

  24. shazwellyn profile image83
    shazwellynposted 7 years ago

    She suffered with short-term memory loss.

  25. kirstenblog profile image77
    kirstenblogposted 7 years ago

    Choosing the wrong street would turn out to be the best thing that ever happened to Ella, for a few feet away there was a huge duffle bag filled $100 bills!

  26. shazwellyn profile image83
    shazwellynposted 7 years ago

    But Ella, as usual, always makes the wrong choice and takes the opposing path.

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    Denno66posted 7 years ago

    The bag of large bills then sat there, unused and lonely...

  28. shazwellyn profile image83
    shazwellynposted 7 years ago

    Ella didn't realise, but the shadow behind was getting closer.

    1. kirstenblog profile image77
      kirstenblogposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Was Ella's story about to change, was something forbidding going to happen?

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    Denno66posted 7 years ago

    without looking back she quickened her pace to put some distance between her and her pursuer..

  30. ThoughtfulSpot profile image83
    ThoughtfulSpotposted 7 years ago

    You guys are cracking me up.  Here's the latest, again w/ last line in CAPS.  KPartin - no worries! And, thanks for the fanmail.

    Ella walked away from the party with an odd look on her face. She had never expected to see a sight like that anywhere
    She was a nice girl and was going to have no part in the filthy going ons of this party!
    Then suddenly, something stopped her in her tracks!
    She looked behind her and suddenly from out of the shadows she saw someone walking towards her in the dark.
    This stranger made her skin tingle and come out in goose bumps. What power did this stranger wield to affect her so?
    Then she realised...
    She recognized the shape, the unique walk, the profile...where had she seen it before?
    "and...where are my pants!?"
    "oh, there they are, I am wearing them... I shouldn't have dropped so much acid."
    Those '60's flash backs are really taking their toll on ella....
    She suddenly realised the echoing self commentary in her head... her nightmare had become reality.  Ella was a parody of the postmodern apocalypse.
    Thank God she had completed that 12 step program; she was never going to be that person again.
    She pondered this whilst taking her gun from her pocket.
    Only to find out it wasn't her gun but a lighter!
    It reminded her that her joint was in the other pocket and pondered.....
    what did I do with my tissues?
    Then she remembered and giggled to herself.
    she then looked to the street sign ahead...
    "Goodness! what a fool I've been..."
    She giggled outloud.
    "I've chosen the wrong street again", she chuckled.
    She suffered with short-term memory loss.
    Choosing the wrong street would turn out to be the best thing that ever happened to Ella, for a few feet away there was a huge duffle bag filled $100 bills!
    But Ella, as usual, always makes the wrong choice and takes the opposing path.
    The bag of large bills then sat there, unused and lonely...
    WAS ELLA'S STORY ABOUT TO CHANGE, WAS SOMETHING FORBIDDING GOING TO HAPPEN?

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    Denno66posted 7 years ago

    or had this already happened and she was just reliving it?

  32. Jeffrey Neal profile image86
    Jeffrey Nealposted 7 years ago

    Quickly she turned and found herself face to face with a strange-looking figure.

  33. K Partin profile image60
    K Partinposted 7 years ago

    But she realized it was only a mannequin that she had felt strangely attracted to.

    1. alexandriaruthk profile image55
      alexandriaruthkposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      But even if it is only a mannequin, she was really interested

      1. K Partin profile image60
        K Partinposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        She touched it's face, felt very plastic!

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    Denno66posted 7 years ago

    It did startle her how much it resembled her long-dead grandfather, however..

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    Denno66posted 7 years ago

    story is getting out of whack this way big_smile

  36. Jeffrey Neal profile image86
    Jeffrey Nealposted 7 years ago

    And then she saw its eye twitch!

  37. K Partin profile image60
    K Partinposted 7 years ago

    But the wackier the better.

  38. K Partin profile image60
    K Partinposted 7 years ago

    It had ticks.

  39. ThoughtfulSpot profile image83
    ThoughtfulSpotposted 7 years ago

    Her uncontrollable fear of lyme disease forced her to turn and flee.

  40. Jery profile image60
    Jeryposted 7 years ago

    Until she noticed a large tick on her arm.

  41. Bovine Currency profile image60
    Bovine Currencyposted 7 years ago

    Its large erect sucking rod draining blood.  Where is it flying to now?  Damn tick.  Ella followed the tick...

  42. mega1 profile image79
    mega1posted 7 years ago

    the tick, engorged with her blood fell onto a stem of grass (ticks can't really fly, you know!) and pretty soon a sweet little deer fawn came along and the tick jumped up onto it for a ride

  43. Bovine Currency profile image60
    Bovine Currencyposted 7 years ago

    oh dear, said Ella.  Ticks don't fly.  Who said that?  Why is there a deer in my room.  Where are my pants?

  44. mega1 profile image79
    mega1posted 7 years ago

    Poor Ella suddenly remembered that last night she had sipped from the wrong drink on the bar - what kind of hallucinogen was she tripping on?

  45. mega1 profile image79
    mega1posted 7 years ago

    Perhaps that wasn't a tick? in her dreamy state she could only remember the engorgement and the sucking sound.

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    B.C. BOUTIQUEposted 7 years ago

    She seems to feel she may be in a bit of trouble.

  47. Jery profile image60
    Jeryposted 7 years ago

    Then she realized the real source of the sucking sounds...

  48. Jery profile image60
    Jeryposted 7 years ago

    and it wasn't a tick at all, it was her...

  49. mega1 profile image79
    mega1posted 7 years ago

    big toe, which she had never seen looking so huge, and so, well lovely! What a lovely big toe! She wanted to

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    B.C. BOUTIQUEposted 7 years ago

    paint it a beautiful crimson to match her long, flowing hair

 
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